How long are they going to keep saying "Sect Daddy"? It's rather jarring to read and breaks the immersion in a cultivation story.
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Eastern · CastlePanda
Ahhh~, our dense panda lol
Blakely blinked, then blinked again. She clearly had no idea why her friends were blushing like crazy with happy eyes. "Of course, silly! A group date. We're all going together."
Fantasy · Ignavia_Ursa
I've heard good things about Grammerly if you haven't tried it yet.
Hello, fellow panda lovers. This is just a heads-up. Two days ago, a friend suggested I use Gptchat for proofreading. I tried it and didn't like it, it didn't feel right. Webnovel won't let me change the mistakes, so for those who unlocked the latest chapters, I am sorry if it wasn't as good. I will not be using that thing again.
Fantasy · Ignavia_Ursa
These forced events and plot holes annoy me too much to waste my coins on this story. Interesting concept, but the execution was poor.
ch 20 It must be uncomfortable being so stiff. Let me help you
Urban · Dawnheart
yes you do... it's called using words
"..." Ethan had no way to press her further, so he turned back and rested his head against the pillow.
Urban · Dawnheart
The problem with allowing Ethan to talk and move his arms is that he has no reason not to have Emily banned from visiting him. Even weak willed cowards would have asked for her to be banned. They wouldn't even need to give a reason, and Emily isn't blackmailing him either.
ch 17 Keep it up
Urban · Dawnheart
we have no idea if it actually happened
ch 14 Medical miracle
Urban · Dawnheart
I see it more as him in a way saying, "Challenge accepted," than him wanting to be conquered.
"I look forward to that day."
Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck
agreed
"It's a bit complicated to explain... but you could say that I don't really like domineering girls." With that, John smiled and patted Lily on the head.
Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck
Norma Jean's stage name is Marilyn Monroe, she's not a transmigrated individual.
NORMA JEANE BAKER"
Movies · EmphieIsMe
so much for hiding his house to
For both Harvey and Thomas, I chose to build an annex to my house. Basically, it was a smaller house connected to mine with all of the appliances and rooms they would need. Since they were only going to stay there until the knights barracks were built, I thought it would be fine to have a guest home, in case I had more visitors in the future.
Fantasy · CaracasM
The one thing missing from this chapter and the last one, is the MCs reasoning as to why he didn't call for at least one of his swords. The point of this fight was that it was fair. Which Darius immediately cheated, so idk our MC kept using the trash sword or why Albert didn't say anything.
ch 94 Strength vs Speed
Fantasy · Katanexy
The part right before the kidnapping. The way she acted before kidnapping was ignored beside one moment from the MC after he woke up from being kidnapped, where all he did was think her change in behavior was suspicious.
ch 32 One of a kind
Urban · ElderGods
That's a lot better, "Sect Father" fits and doesn't break immersion!
Humming thoughtfully, Su Yan responded, "It's likely you've never been here. Sect Father always stayed within the Sacred Cloud Hidden Realm, where the most profound powers of the Sacred Cloud School are stored. He probably had his own library there for easy access."
I Just Inherited My Grandfather's Female Disciples
Eastern · CastlePanda