It's a good story with an original plot. It's generally well written but if I had to cite one negative point, it would be the choice of words for certain terms specific to Avatar. For example, Fire master should be Fire lord. The use of elements is called Bending and users Benders, Firebenders, Airbenders, ... It is still a very pleasant fanfiction to read that I highly recommend.
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Fire Lord*
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it's The Fire Nation and not The Land of Fire
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"her"
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Harry Potter: Mind Control
Book&Literature · Monk_of_Souls
Thanks for the chapter!
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Dragon in Marvel
Anime & Comics · ExistentialVoid
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Thanks for the chapter
A good Fan-fiction with a well built MC. I like the flaws of Alaric. The fact that he don't like muggle is good point for me. I can't stand a perfect MC anymore.
I think his name is Zhao