Insignias 5
Moments 8
Al_Roxas
The last part was repeated again. I wouldnt normallg mention it since the earlier ones where a short part. But it seems it's being repeated and the things repeated are increasing. Hope you can avoid this.
Al_Roxas
The whole chapter 61 is a repeat from chapter 60
Al_Roxas
starting from Marienne POV, it is a repeat from earlier chapter 59. ☹️
Al_Roxas
almost ¼ of the story was repeated again. This also happened in the previous chapter. Is this trying to make the story longer?
Al_Roxas
more chapters to read
Al_Roxas
more xp
Al_Roxas
cool to have nice friends with same mindset
The writing quality and story development was great and keeps the reader glued to their seats. I like the way how it was developed without too much repetitiveness. It was exciting to read the stories and hoping to have more to come.
Assassin's Daughter
Fantasy · Jessica Nolan