Awesome!!! Waiting for more
How about we change the MC to Ib? At least give some special chapters featuring Ib's adventures.
Good start. Wish you success
MC should screw this pig when time is right and if possible then kill him. I hate protagonists who think they can take anything they want for uncertain future. They are too hateful.
SURPRISE!!!!!!!!! 🤬
Ilona on the train was, in fact, Rosier under the effect of the Polyjuice Potion.
Anime & Comics · Scaramousse
Is this sh*tty MC gonna be the next Dark Lord? Have some demeanor, you s*cker!
"Hello, senior! I'm a freshman at Hogwarts; you can call me Wentworth! It's a pleasure to meet you, senior. Are all the seniors at Hogwarts so dignified and impressive? I feel... It's quite stressful!"
Anime & Comics · Scaramousse
Dear author, I took back all my previous comments, this was just translation. Keep up the good work![img=recommend]
Seriously?! 'Thank you'? If the plot wasn't promising, I would have dropped this at this exact moment.
"Right hand, thank you!" Wentworth replied.
Anime & Comics · Scaramousse
Just telling your name? It's fine if you wanna create cliff-hanger, but this is too crude. Not telling the family name is unacceptable in any culture I guess. (I'm talking about Cassandra). Don't force things.
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HP: The Sun
Book&Literature · Bter