I'm going to be honest not one of ur best plus 18 chaps it felt rushed and I get it writing r18 is quite difficult but u could've add foreplay on yasaka and made the main part more descriptive but it doesn't really matter cuz overall the story was quite good
thx for the chap I'm curious why does this novels update feel slower than your other fanfics is it just me or what
she is also getting bloodline traits so mabye she'll get one that cancles his ability
thx for the chap btw I want to give advice but it's up to u if u want to listen to me cuz this is ur fanfic so anyway I've read the fallen angel gamer but stopped half way cuz of hela and akeno. hela because of how you wrote her I feel like u made her to much of a dom like she fucks rias and sona and gets them prego when in fact they are part of the mc harem I hope you don't do that in this fanfics but if u do it's fine. next akeno was kinda disappointed that she wasn't part of the mc harem it kinda made sense cuz they are related but whatever and yes I'm a huge simp for akeno any ways this is just me nitpicking u don't have to listen to me just do your thing and make an amazing fanfic
bro pls add the girl from triple hhh the one from the first episode
tftc instead of grayfia u could go for venelana cuz her husband has a harem (not quite sure of this but it's quite common in fanfics) so you can make a story around how venelana is unsatisfied plus you can do a oyakadon in the future
tftc, but is this the end of the fanfic or just the Yugioh part, and the next part is Gx if this is the end well thanks for the wonderful journey loved this fanfic and will miss it
tftc and would like to see more interaction with jane doe
good story so far would love to read more chapters always loved kluas man was just a giant teddy bear btw can u change the cover it looks off it doesnt really look like klaus honestly
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original Teen Wolf: Decendant
After the tragic death of his parents, Lucius Aldric seeks refuge in the mysterious town of Beacon Hills, accompanied by his childhood friend, Hope Sinclair. As he struggles to rebuild his life, Lucius uncovers a dormant and ancient power lurking within him—one that has been waiting to be awakened. But as dark forces begin to stir, Lucius finds himself questioning the nature of this newfound power. Is it a gift that will help him conquer his demons or a curse that threatens to destroy everything he holds dear? In a town where secrets run deep, Lucius must navigate the fine line between salvation and destruction6 Chs 229 Colecciones
um i dont know why you removed the fanfic from webnovel but I really liked it and don't know where you have taken ur fic can u tell me ps I didn't know how to contact u so writing a review
Taming the True Fire (HP)
Book&Literature · Sailea