Sin felt like a nane for a second 😅
Sin has always stuck with humans since ancient times. No matter who it is, humans always commit sins in their life.
I JUST WANT A PEACEFUL LIFE
Fantasy · Alex_Destro
? "stops", "doesn't", and "looks, not a part of dialogue. Carry on, my bad I replied to you like an adult. you must be sm 14-yr-old kid too proud to accept your mistake once confronted.
As Leo spoke, Zack had a look of disbelief on his face, "B-But we can't.. how did you find a way out of here anyway? This place is like a fortress" Leo let out a long sigh "Look Zack, I know you're afraid of getting caught trying leave, but we can't stay here. Sooner or later they're going to work us to death."
KINETIC
Fantasy · MagusRex
the first para of this chap is in past tense, the second is in present. if you can't tell the difference, then it's your problm
As Leo spoke, Zack had a look of disbelief on his face, "B-But we can't.. how did you find a way out of here anyway? This place is like a fortress" Leo let out a long sigh "Look Zack, I know you're afraid of getting caught trying leave, but we can't stay here. Sooner or later they're going to work us to death."
KINETIC
Fantasy · MagusRex
how can there be so much spelling mistakes. i can understand grammar and writing skill. such spelling mistakes only comes with translations though
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Fantasy · Azurian_Element
beginning you mean?
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Fantasy · Azurian_Element
confusing, please elaborate?
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Fantasy · Azurian_Element
haha the system just literally forced itself into him and now asking for permission 😂
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Fantasy · Azurian_Element
A young middle-aged man lol.. why are you afraid to say just middle-aged man author? 😅😅
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Fantasy · Azurian_Element
i was wondering when the author would f up the tenses and pov ☹️☹️☹️
As Leo spoke, Zack had a look of disbelief on his face, "B-But we can't.. how did you find a way out of here anyway? This place is like a fortress" Leo let out a long sigh "Look Zack, I know you're afraid of getting caught trying leave, but we can't stay here. Sooner or later they're going to work us to death."
KINETIC
Fantasy · MagusRex
both sentence meant the same thing 🤔
"Nonsense! I never take anything from you?! I always give everything to you, brother!!" said the man
I JUST WANT A PEACEFUL LIFE
Fantasy · Alex_Destro