Heni92

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Heni92
Heni92
9 months ago
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This was one of the better, well-written stories I’ve read here. I really liked that the writer focused on quality rather than quantity with a normal amount of chapters. The world-building was great, and there was character development. The pacing was perfect. I will say that Casey, the FMC, is not one of my favorites. She was too uptight, irritating, and a bit immature when it came to the opposite sex. But she knew her faults, the areas she needed to work on, and why she was that way. The author did a good job explaining her background, and I gained a better understanding of her. By the end of the story, I found myself liking her more. I do wish we learned more about her mother.

Heni92
Heni92
9 months ago
Commented

She is soooooo dense! For Godsakes she is 24 for crying out loud!!

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“What’s wrong with you? Why are you acting like this?” I ignored him and got straight to the point.

Violet Stone

Violet Stone

Eastern · caktwrites

Heni92
Heni92
9 months ago
Commented

I feel like she needs to take a deep breath, accept that she can't control everything, and go with the flow (within reason) because she is about to give herself a heart attack with how uptight and stressed she is.

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"That doesn't make me feel any better!" I groaned and gripped my head. I felt a migraine coming. "How are we going to get to Jackie's school if the conductor is sleeping?!"

Violet Stone

Violet Stone

Eastern · caktwrites

Heni92
Heni92
9 months ago
Commented

Eden is like "Did I stutter" LOL

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Eden gave the prince a blank expression as he frowned deeply. "I need to hear it from your mouth."

No Love Lose

No Love Lose

Fantasy · Alexialasthope

Heni92
Heni92
9 months ago
Commented

Sol:

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"But father. We're just really close." Mila said. Tears were coming out of her eyes. Eden rolled his eyes. Abidemi nibbled on her cookie and Sol just watched with his head in his hands.

No Love Lose

No Love Lose

Fantasy · Alexialasthope

Heni92
Heni92
9 months ago
Commented

Eden said "f around and find out" lol

"I do know that the Sealen family can destroy you in a flash." Eden said darkly. Logan clenched his teeth. "Touch Abidemi like that again. Just try it."

No Love Lose

No Love Lose

Fantasy · Alexialasthope

Heni92
Heni92
9 months ago
Commented

Yea, cuz she aint stranger dumb dumb 🙄

Mila pouted at him. "But you let Abidemi touch you."

No Love Lose

No Love Lose

Fantasy · Alexialasthope

Heni92
Heni92
9 months ago
Commented

He’s got some nerve seeking out his late wife’s guidance after being an absentee father while she was alive and then abandoning Abidemi when she died. 😒😒

Heni92
Heni92
9 months ago
Commented

15 years?! And he’s acting like this? I thought their falling out was a couple of months, maybe a year long. 🤷🏾‍♀️ But gotdamn 15 years

"Because you haven't spoken to my sister in fifteen years in favor of Mila." Eden called out as he walked into the room. Logan, Shyla, and Kanene looked over to see Eden glaring at Logan. He was still dressed in his training outfit and his sword was still by his hip. His usual off-blue eyes were now glowing as he walked in the room. " You have some nerves bursting in here and yelling at her personal maids like that. Turning up uninvited even."

No Love Lose

No Love Lose

Fantasy · Alexialasthope

Heni92
Heni92
9 months ago
Commented

Wow what a douchebag 😧 He kicked his 5 years old daughter!

"From now on you'll be staying at the Sunflower Estate." The Duke Of Sealen said to a young Abidemi who was only five years old. Abidemi hugged her doll closed as she closed her eyes tightly.

No Love Lose

No Love Lose

Fantasy · Alexialasthope