Phaethon

1 months ago

Commented

The snake was thrown away, and spent the next few seconds writhing till its brain eventually froze.

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Phaethon

1 months ago

Commented

This is the 3rd countless I counted in almost as many paragraphs...

"Protect your legs," Nero said to Wendy as he covered his own legs with flames, before throwing himself into the thick of things. A spear was not the best weapon to fight countless, small enemies such as hundreds of snakes, but Nero himself was the best weapon against everything.

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Phaethon

1 months ago

Commented

Countless again. How are we to trust it now?

A large gust of air hit the ground all around him, launching mulch, as well as countless snakes in the air. Wendy, who was keeping up with Nero, flashed forward cutting through the snakes right in the air with her short sword and blade.

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Phaethon

1 months ago

Commented

They're teenagers. Countless years hardly seems to apply here 😃

He looked at Wendy, and the two formed a tacit understanding that only came from knowing each other for countless years. He nodded, and created an opening in his flames before dashing through, followed closely by Wendy.

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Phaethon

1 months ago

Commented

Trap cards

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Phaethon

1 months ago

Commented

Except there's a ruler of the flames in the room...

'Lith can't have made up so many details. Also, if he truly was able to craft a perfect Darwen armor, he would be at the level of a Ruler of the Flames.' All the convoluted possible scenarios and conjectures Aalejah could come up with crashed against the simplicity of reality.

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Phaethon

3 months ago

Commented

So he's being chased in fear for his life by people stronger than him... And he stops to watch a 30 sec video? How is he not dead yet?

He, just like the rest of the people at the canyon who were bored to death waiting, clicked on the video and saw the thirty seconds battle, which ended almost just as quick as it started.