A_Starving_Writer

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it a lot

Thanks a lot for the review. I appreciate it.

Author Bias included. I think readers should give this story a chance and see if they would like to go forward in it. No book is made for everyone, so I won't pretend like this is an exception. Reading a few chapters should allow you to get a good idea of what the story is about, but it has more depth than you realize. The more you read, the more depth you'll uncover. Also, if you genuinely enjoy my work, please support this novel by voting with your Power Stones, commenting, or even telling others about it. I appreciate all the help.

I'd like you all to read this Review to the end, if possible. I just want to explain a few things about the story, so you can enjoy it more. I won't tell you anything fancy about it, since I haven't really released a lot of chapters. Once I have a substantial number of chapters, I'll give a proper review on the quality of this novel. Feel free to give your reviews as you read, though. Comments are also very much appreciated, as I'm still a growing author and I'm trying my best to learn. Now, then... to the point of this Review. This story, Elohim Saga, is very unique in the sense that it is centered around a certain lore. My characters (more specifically, their Incarnations) are characters of the Bible/Torah. Since these are considered Holy Books in certain religions, I want to give a disclaimer here. I will be incorporating elements from the Bible/Torah, in terms of characters or certain regions or plot points. If you belong to any of the concerned religions, please know that this is simply a work of fiction and isn't meant to directly or indirectly affect your faith. I'm just incorporating the characters, exaggerating the narrative, and borrowing some elements there... treating the issues themselves as mythology. With that out of the way, I'd like to explain that while these elements are borrowed from the Christian/Jewish/Moslem mythology of Abrahamic Descent, it does not resemble it in any way. This is simply a work of fiction, no similar to how you'll encounter Greek gods in stories, or certain historical characters in novels. Just treat it like that. There are 12 candidates in the story, and their Incarnations are all characters from the aforementioned sources. I have a very detailed index on them, and I've tried my best to do my research to flesh them out well and add fantasy elements to them so they're even more akin to Original Characters. Also, let's remember this is a game-like world. The concept is pretty simple. It's a battle-royale between twelve people. What makes the story complex is what happens as they journey through this world, meet inhabitants, get into many challenges, seek out clues, or clash against each other. All-in-all, its an epic story. I hope you enjoy it. PS: Solomon is my favorite Incarnation. Have a lovely time reading.