HerbZZy420

I love the concepts so far with all the mystery involving the assassins and Norse mythology. I'd love to see more assassin stuff happen in the near future. But really great so far. I can't wait for there to be more to read. [img=Loving it]

In love with this so far. Please, you have to keep writing this, if you drop this I will call upon the The Death Korps of Krieg to take you so you can repent for your treachery against the Emperor of Mankind. FOR THE EMPORER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update]

I really enjoyed the read, but could have had a slightly more thought out and better explained/expanded ending. The (translated?) English was pretty good, there were a number of times where grammar or word order made me have to read twice to understand it properly. But over all it was really good and I thoroughly enjoyed the story.

I love the character and the story so far. It could do with some professional editing (grammar and incorrect words at times). But overall it is a great story with a twist that is somewhat original (at least I haven't read any HP fanfic that is similar)

I must say that I am thoroughly enjoying this so far. I'm looking forward to more chapters. I can't wait for the story to progress. [img=coins][img=exp]