If you're going to describe a character, add a comma. For example... Jonathan Preston, the ex-FSU... You feel me?
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SCORCHING BLACK VULTURE
Sci-fi · MansonFD7
Also it's "a lab leak", to lessen confusion with the grammar.
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SCORCHING BLACK VULTURE
Sci-fi · MansonFD7
Make it a bit more formal by saying "one" instead of 1, depending on the statement.
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SCORCHING BLACK VULTURE
Sci-fi · MansonFD7
Make sure the 'titled' "Scorching Virus" has capital letters in the first character of the two words. So it won't confuse the readers.
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SCORCHING BLACK VULTURE
Sci-fi · MansonFD7
*that can make the human body burn It's not a past statement, so it should be burn, and not burnt. Because it's in present statement.
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SCORCHING BLACK VULTURE
Sci-fi · MansonFD7
The story was well written, barely any grammatical errors. The plot is amazing. It's not like any other war/military story, it gives encouragement, overpowerment, and motivational inspiration to those who want to have a good time feeling ecstatic to the readers viewing your book!
It should be "Blood for blood, kin for kin" add a coma. If you want you can always go check out Punctuation Checker when manually editing. It works better than Grammarly, just click look up than deep look up. It's very simple yet the most useful.
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Blood Dragon Khan
Eastern · ArkAnghel
Read further when I publish future updates which will be every 9 AM in (GMT+8) Timezone. , the main theme of the story isn't sci-fi, it's a pilot volume which means it's not canon but they are connected to the rest of the other 5 future volumes, soon. Spoilers, the main plot of the novel in the second volume is about a vampire with a psychological disorder and can infect his insanity to other people.
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Writer's Reincarnations (DISCONTINUED)
Fantasy · KleiNightwriter
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original Writer's Reincarnations
As he is a lost lamb, he is still predator amongst the human society of the mundane world, as he keeps dying as a human, his vampiric soul reincarnates as forever and eternal. The vampire never dies, even his mortal vessel dissipates under the grave. A wilted flower blooms another.127 Chs 90 Colecciones
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VR: Nerve Gear Reincarnation
“A dystopian story about a Virtual Reality Nerve Gear, designed to take your consciousness into the future of your reincarnation.”3 Chs 0 Colecciones
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Diary Of A Serial Killer
An indie author commits real life crime scenes in order to inspire himself to write novels based on true events.5 Chs 4 Colecciones
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Reincarnation Pill: The Retired Assassin
Before the nuclear war of the 21st century, a vampire named Voltaire took a pill for him to escape the troubles of the dystopian reality of our apparent world. Then, the pill made him dream about his life-long reincarnation to a post-apocalyptic world, where time became medieval again, in a fantasy-like world. Then, he meets his past-self from the current era, as they converse and travel together as one soul but different people, bounded by fate.13 Chs 2 Colecciones
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Long The Skeld: AI/BOT Generated AMONG US FAN-FICTION
I recorded myself playing Among Us for 6 hours and let an Artificial Intelligent Bot to watch it entirely then made it to write a fan-fiction about it.2 Chs 2 Colecciones
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Writer Reincarnates To His Own Books
Klei was an aspiring writer with a dark past. However, his insanity was too hard to bear, he decided to end his own life only just to go into a rabbit hole of madness. As he descends into the depths of the rabbit hole, he comes to reincarnate into his own books. To the point where he came back to reality from attempted suicide accidentally leaving the door open from the his personal hell. All of the monsters from his world came into reality, now his split personality, Fear, the psychopathic narcissist that now rules the world of dystopia in the post-apocalyptic world he once knew a beautiful earth. He has to stop him, not for the sake of the world, but for the sake of one yandere that he loves.6 Chs 6 Colecciones
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The Collective Manuscript
Based on The Book of Voltaire as a separate book that shows the mindset of the author how he views the world and society in general. That real-life people made it into an actual religion as a spiritual movement.3 Chs 3 Colecciones
*Got into a fight Not get, the grammar matters when it comes to statements of context.
"Deandra Atma Wijaya. You are accused of being the mastermind behind the murder of your own parents. That night on the twelfth of November, you came home from a friend's house. Get into a fight with your parents. You then entered your father's room without permission and took a firearm from the bedroom drawer. Then shoot your mother in the chest three times. Your father tried to stop you by trying to grab the gun, but ended up getting two shots in the head and chest. Then you decide to call the police out of panic and fear. With so much evidence against you, I hereby demand Fifteen Years in prison for murder."
Trapped In The Novel Of Criminal World
Fantasy · Ibn_Zhaf