Webnovel Author: Darkness_Enjoyer - Novel&Fanfic Collection

I replied every to other comment and this one 'After' that day. I am neither tired right now nor was tired when I was replying to other comments. Also, none of those replies were that longer than my initial response, just like this one.

It's a clear and good review; thanks for writing it. To address the writing style, this is mainly how I write the fights, but according to the feedback from the readers, I can adapt to different styles of writing. As for the criticism regarding the plot, you are absolutely correct. The plot revolves so much around the emotional aspect and interactions of the main characters right now. I am trying to display how a person can change from a cold-blooded revenge pursuer to a healed human. But, by doing that, the story overwhelmingly became something that is hard to be called as a revenge plot, and I am aware of this. Though it is not purely unlogical, and these types of things can easily be covered, from a reader's perspective, it most likely makes the MC weirdly lost. I will try to improve on this aspect to make the plot 'advance' rather than stagnate.

I mean, it's a story inspired by Aphelios, at least. However, I am also a Sherlock Holmes fan, so it became something mixed with Sherlock Holmes, Aphelios, and a classic academy setting.

That is an understandable point. From what I see, you dislike 'guns,' which is completely fine. Callius is a magic/sword user, and Astron is different. But well, just to be clear, the reason why this novel was written is not related to Novel's Extra; it has already been at least 3-4 years since I read it. The reason is solely because I love Aphelios' story and wanted to write a story regarding him. That is it.

You certainly hadn't read more than 30 chapters. I can tell even without checking, but sure? Thanks for the review.