Based on the stars I gave, I'm going to assume that it's pretty obvious that I like this book a lot, so to make it short, but hopefully helpful, I will mainly stick to pointing out cons (to many pros). For one, the characters are all very well made and everyone has an actual life in there and not just "MC is great", but then you have Rina, who in my opinion is the most engaging character even rivaling Aron, but she has almost no "screen time", lets call it (I am reading it on a phone so screen time it is). Another thing, is that while it is #kingdombuilding, I'm not sure I like how we went from 1. Family 2. Work 3. System, to a weird priority setup of 1. Work 2. Kingdom 3. System/Family. And it really irks me, because the story is nice and all, but while I didn't quite like Arons parents as characters for how passive they were (because they are normal humans and therfore can't suddenly lead a ministry/nation or whatever) they are still nice. However, when Rina or (sorry I don't want to spoil) the Xor'vac 'addition' came into view, the story was already so focused on being #kingdombuilding that they have almost no presence. Almost every time we see Rina with Aron in those later chapters is when she tries and sometimes even FAILS to drag Aron away from work. The fact that it makes this relationship look shaky makes it even worse. Now, I know I've been ranting, but those are basically just two and probably only major cons I see in this book. Otherwise it's great. I write this review in this way, because I like reading very much and often I can read anything as long as it doesn't push my buttons too much, but most review are either just bad or talk about good points only so maybe this will help someone looking for a good read more than just some flowery.
who knows, endings are hella hard to write. It's like half the effort of the entire book, at least from my experience.
Ok, fine, I procrastinated. As an excuse I will say: end of semester exams. Good thing, they are now over, so unless I go back to procrastinating now that they are done, I will go back to writing. I wish you luck I don't, and myself as well, I want to see where this goes as well...
+1, though I can see some not insignificant support for Dragon Heart, which I don't mind, but it just was a while since we had some Branwen content.
That thing happened and that's why I needed to somehow get myself a new log in method. Oh, and the "help" hyperlink didn't work.
Guys, I'm finally back! You may in fact be less happy to see me that I am to write again, because due to the fact that I was logged in by facebook to webnovel, after the new meta subscription update (on Facebook), this log in option no longer worked for me, so I nearly lost this account, because I couldn't log in.
Understanding freedom - httyd fanfic
Urban · Vatorum
I may change this chapter later, though.
I feel like I'm still not getting it right, but since I said that I will post soon, at the very least, I will post it this weekend.
Unfortunately not. The update will be hopefully completed soon, but it's an important point in this volume and I'm not quite satisfied with the chapter.
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original Understanding freedom - httyd fanfic
The Story begins after the events of HTTYD 2 movie. Zoya, the MC of this fanfic, was reincarnated as a young Night Fury. Follow her as she adapts to her new reality and faces adversity to find a place for herself in the complex dynamic of humans, dragons and everything in between. --- This is my first story on this platform and any overall that I publicated in any way, so do keep that in mind. I also write it most for myself so don't expect regular updates. Anyways, if you're staying, then have a nice read. --- Also this is not my original idea, but my take on a fanfic by Majo_Kuro_Akuma that has been dropped for around one year as I write this (title: Not so tamable). Therefore first chapters are quite similar. Book Cover by GoT-God from Pinterest16 Chs 49 Colecciones
I don't think you ment it, but this last sentance makes it sound like she just called Korea a city, which isn't inherently wrong since calling a city state, a city, is perfectly fine, but Korea, as small as it is (among other East Asian countries), it's not that small. Still hillarious.
The item was in the middle of nowhere in Korea, so she was just using the time to get some souvenirs for the girls, and maybe find some magical stuff if lucky. So far she hadn't found anything all that interesting, besides the great food and atmosphere. But she wasn't expecting much, as it seemed that most of the magic of this world was localized around New York, and a few other large cities, and Korea wasn't one of them.
SpiderGwen: I have a system?!
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