Jake_Hoot

please update more often i love this book.

its ok. its a classic harem story which is really annoying and what makes it worse is that this story had alot of potential if wasnt so focused on the R18 and harem stuff

bruh sad it ended so soon but we need a sequel

sad that the story is over, I absolutely love this book and want a sequel PLEEEAASSSEEE[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

amazing for your first novel. i love this story keep up the good work!

amazing story so beautiful. everything about it is amazing hard to believe its your first work.

You said this was your first story?! holy shite dude its within my top 3 fav og novels on this site. the character design and backstory delicious. i dont know much of the cultivation stuff but i know enough from what they say in the book. i also like how dark the story is and how that changes the character into how they are. i hate that god tho or just humans like that in stories or in general.if i could give this 6 stars i would. i also like how realistic the story is told through the words where it seems as nothing is held back and described to perfection.

ikr i love this story one of my favoutites

the best story ive found of a second reincarnated person alongside rimuru. love the character, they are quite unique. really needs to be updated more like a lot more though. ive literally been searching the internet for months trying to find this story because it was so good and i couldnt find it.