Webnovel Author: taranowhere - Fanfic Collection

Just a suggestion, for conversations/dialogues it would be best to add a sign (") to the conversation

Well I agree with what he said

Thanks for chapter

This fanfiction has developed in a good way, I mean I like it where you show Naruto's strength and emotional development in detail and I think the storyline is right , the storyline should be tagged 'slice of life' which I know and then don't forget the development of the side characters which makes me appreciate your work, good job

I thought this would be good but after seeing chapter 1 it made me a little annoyed, you know gomu gomu I mean hito hito nomi Nika's mode is very strong and she replaced it with something come on bjng instead of throwing away the real fruit why not give the MC a physical Who can eat two devil fruits like black beard

Helshing, Van helshing What's more, I don't know the whole story because I only watched episode 1 and immediately dropped it

Up!

This is so cool, j can see this Fanfict have a big potential

well with traumatic, midoriya have a problem with his psychic

oh man, i think nie li will join. because i think mc can take advantage of nie li with all his knowledge of future plots in exchange nie li will give an equivalent exchange with our mc