To be honest with you, there isn't much to say about it. Starting with the MC dying is somehow a give a way for reincarnation, I followed this story expecting a sort of intriguing war between brothers and the struggle to catch up to him along the line. But now that I see where it is going, meh idk.
Moments later, Izono, too, was slain by the Anbu Black Ops. He died begging for mercy, crying out for his older brother to save him.
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but being reincarnated into a jonin already without going through the process of character growth is lazy writing in and on itself.
Moments later, Izono, too, was slain by the Anbu Black Ops. He died begging for mercy, crying out for his older brother to save him.
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Well, no, it wouldn't be bad if it was written with reason and a good storyline behind it. If it is reincarnation, I would guess it would be another one of those marry sue ff's. but for reanimation in the war, he needs to have significance beforehand, where the reader already followed his feats. his fame. his struggles. to be able to feel excited about this prospect.
Moments later, Izono, too, was slain by the Anbu Black Ops. He died begging for mercy, crying out for his older brother to save him.
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yeah, that's why I said that, isn't he the MC?
Moments later, Izono, too, was slain by the Anbu Black Ops. He died begging for mercy, crying out for his older brother to save him.
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surviving 4 swords is highly unlikely so that's why I said that
Moments later, Izono, too, was slain by the Anbu Black Ops. He died begging for mercy, crying out for his older brother to save him.
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good god... not a femboy hinata
"Um… please take care of me from now on," he said, trying to avoid eye contact with a quivering voice.
Anime & Comics · SaintXI
I see a lot of f*ckd up fanfic when the characters knows everything, but the other side where the mc doesn't know at all tends to be really good. Anyway, want someone that knows well and write well? take a look at "the outsider's resolve" it's a gem. been following it for a year now.
Ye Zi weakly lifted his head and looked into the cold, serpentine eyes. At that moment, he realized that the world he was in was far from ordinary, and indeed, he had no other choice.
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reincarnation maybe?
Moments later, Izono, too, was slain by the Anbu Black Ops. He died begging for mercy, crying out for his older brother to save him.
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Chapter 8: Why?
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Aight, cheers mate.
Moments later, Izono, too, was slain by the Anbu Black Ops. He died begging for mercy, crying out for his older brother to save him.
Naruto:A Failures Dream
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