Azrael_fallenstar

why so many name changes, is it called Isaac or Robert, although I don't think it's your fic but if it is then, I can only tell you to decide on the name quickly

Friend, seriously, most people think that Kaido lost easily against Luffy and the truth is not like that, Kaido spent fight after fight without resting or replenishing energy unlike Luffy, also let me tell you that Kaido does not even have any weakness for Observation Haki, in fact he has it at an advanced level, only he does not use it, in fact he used it I think only once in the entire fight when he shows Luffy that he could also predict the future, I know that many may not agree with me but that only shows that they really did not pay attention to what they were seeing, Kaido has the three types of Haki at an advanced level, I know it is late due to the time that the chapter came out and I do not know if someone had already clarified that point for you but I had to say it, however, taking that out I have to say that so far it seems to me a quite interesting story I hope to see how far you go and thanks for the chapter

Well from what I see he wants to do something similar to Gohan, that is, a being with such absurd potential that even with years of lack of adequate training, he can evolve and reach the level of Goku and Vegeta who have never stopped training, however that only makes it somewhat ridiculous because the only ones who can do something like that are Broly and Gohan, and while the mixed Saiyans are powerful, they have enough potential and talent to reach Super Saiyan as children, there we have to understand that individuals like Gohan and Broly are ridiculous not only because someone like Broly is born only once every thousand years (this is literally canon), but someone like Gohan is not far behind him either, literally the second Saiyan with the most talent and potential that has ever existed and that's only if we count Broly, Goten and Trunks are only as good because they are children of Goku and Vegeta when they were experiencing a rapid development in strength, in terms of talent and potential these are surely on par with Goku and Vegeta however I doubt very much that they will surpass them and even less that they can reach Gohan, this is something that anyone who knows a little bit of Dragon Ball (that is, having seen Z, and a little bit of Super) realized even if they don't say it they know it subconsciously, so a third generation mixed Saiyan (that's how I think he should be called due to the timeline in which he is born, Gohan being first generation, that is, before the Frieza saga and second generation those that come after the Trunks saga of the future, that is, when he appears for the first time) like Bra, although he may be powerful, I don't think he can surpass Gohan, maybe a little better than Goten and Trunks but reaching the same height as Gohan that is something that no one can believe regardless of what logic is used because the closer you are to Gohan means that you are closer to Broly and that is something that no one can stand either consciously or unconsciously.

well I think this book is declining a lot, I say I like it and everything but the way you raised the power and potential of bra is almost absurd, not only this many things lack sense in themselves, a clear example is when you said that Vegeta would never train Bra because he is afraid that she will get hurt, that is totally ridiculous Vegeta although he may not insist that she train if she asked him he would do it for sure because for Vegeta there would be no greater pride in that his children follow his Saiyan heritage, what I am going with this is that although for some it may seem interesting I think that the majority will end up getting tired like this and will abandon the reading, the reason is simple from my point of view you raised many things with the logic that this happens because yes and that's it, (that is to say abusing the logic of the butterfly effect, making it lose meaning), I am not saying that it is wrong, you are the author and only you have the right to say what is right and what is wrong in this story, I only give you my opinion nothing more, it is but that you It will be useful for future stories. Thank you very much for the chapter.

I loved it haha, I hope that somehow Aoi and Takada-chan start dating, thanks for the chapter

This part of the story is quite interesting, although sometimes it moves too fast but it is still quite good.

A name for the kingdom could be "Eleum Loyce" (if it's from Dark Souls 2), but I think that would make it more interesting and about the weather, in my opinion, I think it would be better to leave it as if it were always winter.

Well I hope you release the remake soon, I was really enjoying it, thanks I hope to see you soon

Thanks for the chapter, keep it up

Hello, in fact if Gloxinia is very good at perceiving magical power, if it is part of disaster or some other ability I do not know, however you could apply it as magical perception and one with a very high range, because he could know what happened in Camelot and in the Fairy King's Forest when he was in Edinburgh and that is a long distance, as for disaster in theory he could perceive the life of the forest or plants, as well as nature spirits due to the characteristics of said ability.