bondarant

bondarant

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death to the world.

2021-12-02 Se unió Global
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bondarant
bondarant
15 days ago
Commented

Jesus Christ loves you despite all the hatred that anyone has for him he has died for them and even in his last moments he said "Father forgive them for they not know what they do" remember his sacrifice

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bondarant
bondarant
1 months ago
Posted

this guy has used chat gpt to correct his works or wrote entire lines from the prompts its not a bad idea and the execution seems good enough but at some point reading the exact same ai written lines over and over again makes it unbearable

bondarant
bondarant
1 months ago
Posted

it's a decent read i think the personality is really well written but the plot comes off as really forced and it is. i don't really get the whole forced relationships either and then when emma was freed she just went back to her usual plot? i'd expect some development like she actually falls in love with him or something and then he reveals the whole system because instincts lol i don't really know what to say other than this fanfic won't go far good luck man

bondarant
bondarant
2 months ago
Commented

at some point i really hope his charisma becomes higher

bondarant
bondarant
3 months ago
Posted

honestly i never would have expected such a work coming from webnovel but its interesting thought provoking attention grabing its great i hope you can finish this book (maybe you can add me as a cameo?)

bondarant
bondarant
3 months ago
Commented

i genuinely don't understand this is the dumbest plot i have come across

bondarant
bondarant
bondarant
4 months ago
Commented

why does he not use his dark magic to coat his weapon?

bondarant
bondarant
5 months ago
Commented

i hope you get better bro

bondarant
bondarant
6 months ago
Replied to John_Doe_777

you are right and i am sorry for my overraction, but just not my cup of tea you did not deserve 1 star have a good day

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