You have such a wonderful way of describing each character's physicality that really brings across their personalities.
I was immediately drawn in by Vivian's perspective on the going-ons and people of the house and the contrast with Kyrie's more demure personality. Renard's introduction was sweet and I look forward to seeing more of his relationship with Vivian.
I've been regularly coming back to this story for the characters, the world, and the intrigue in the plot. The interactions between everyone, from the lowest slave to the wealthiest nobles, have been solid and engaging. In the span of the first ten chapters, we see Kyrie, shy and isolated, open up a little more to the other slaves in the manor. We see her mature into her own, engaging with Isaac's teasing flirtations while he simultaneously begins to recognize his desire for her as well. We are also introduced to the class divide between the slaves and several nobles within the world and the differing ways in which different households treat their slaves. I've enjoyed the slice of life aspect of the story to a great degree and I look forward to seeing where the mystery and the plot go.
Love In the Dandridge Manor
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