See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ehhh, the book is interesting, but the author needs to do more world building...Lets see how the storyy goes
need more chapters 😸
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Villain's Awakening System
Fantasy · Aks_
will do!
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Villain's Awakening System
Fantasy · Aks_
interesting ...
Ok so first of all, I think that it's a great idea to write a novel on as well as the grammar is not a problem. What I would like to add though would be that you could phrase your words better....
Hello everyone, fellow reader here. The synopsis looks good and the language is not bad either... The synopsis is awesome and I hope the author finishes the story...
Well, the main plot has finally been set! Thank god it has started... I would die reading the back story... Overall the novel's really nice. The grammar is above average but can be improved... I hope the author continues this book... thanks
richiee
But my mind was screaming. This was one of the very kings willing to spend thousands of credits as a reward for my head, the man who saw me as a threat to his empire. And she—Lilith—was the princess of Rome, the heir to the throne of the very kingdom that wanted me dead.
Death God's System
Fantasy · bearateme_