Vilgax ??
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My friend, a good start, an interesting system, the continuation of the story stimulates curiosity, please continue writing.
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Dude, you didn't drop this, did you? I don't know or don't know of any decent fanfic about Martial Peak. I'm impatiently waiting for the new episode.
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Even though I don't comment much, I've been here since the first episode. I love reading your story. I took a break because the last arc was boring for me, but now I've come this far by reading it from the beginning :D
How many of you are still here?
My Second Life in Another World
Anime & Comics · OVERLOAD69
The first step is to apply the nature transformations to the leaves. Step 2 is to seal around the hand with the appropriate item (like chidori for lightning, but without further superficial self-harm). The nature transformation as the 3rd stage is to release a larger area and control its effect (for example, in the anime, Naruto splits the waterfall with the wind). I leave it to your imagination to develop the stages and implement more.
It's nice to have sections like this, my friend, it helps us understand the story better. But I wish you made the chapters a little longer, it ends in one breath. [img=recommend]
i hope more will come
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Yes, I'm all for it! (Comment Likes will be counted as votes)
One Piece: Coby with Skill Weaver System
Anime & Comics · PinkIsJustice