Out of the many books I've read on this platform, this one is one of the very few that could be published to a wider range of audience after grammatical fixing and maybe combining the storylines from other main couples in the other books of the same series. The world and setting in this novel is new and interesting, with just the right amount of twists and comedy. The book is not just some bland romance in fantasy world with mostly smut or boring everyday life, but has depth to it. Really wish this universe could be further expanded, with potential romance of other important characters.
the writing quality needs to be improved. the story is a series of sentences.
i mean so much trouble getting here and not taking anything else? go cilv.
They rummaged and rummaged through the piles. Evanna was now at one end of the room, her feet still planted on top of golden coins while Cilv was at the other. Evanna noticed a few times, Cilv placing some smaller jewels in her pockets.
Fantasy · Kelly_Starrz
completely forgot about him. what happened to him again? 🐑
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maybe he's the former king and that witch's son!
no offense, but it would be great to shorten the intimate scene writing so we can find out what happens next
wow! so many updates today. how come?
it's probably damian
But regardless of whatever potion it was, the question now on all their minds was WHO? Who was this person messing with all of them?
Fantasy · ThatAmazingGirl
Also this book is the most interesting book of the series.
Belle Adams' Butler
Fantasy · ash_knight17