Enlightened_Clown

questionable questing, a site for fics like ffnet or ao3

yeah bro take author's even deeper

Read up till 11, dunno why it says 3.

Writing quality- 5 It reads easily and with very few errors. Story Development- 3 Despite the author's best efforts, the narrative still seems to be controlled rather than developing organically. Character Development- 4 Since I dropped this early, the story did not have time to develop, so this parameter should be moot. But the -1 is for his carelessness, which felt forced in order to show us Oozaru's form. He could have simply teleported with Kai Kai. Update schedule- 5 ??? It took me an hour to get to the place where I dropped, so I am not sure about the update schedule. So you have to find it yourself. Then why five stars? Because it is my fault, not the author's, that I did not know. World background- 5 Again, 5 because I dropped too soon while it was still in the setup stage. Now why did I drop- It is not because of any flaws in the story; rather, I did not like the direction it was taking. I dislike mentor/babysitting arcs, particularly when the MC is still four.