Pedro_Leon_Ramos

Pedro_Leon_Ramos

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2021-10-18 Se unió Global
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Pedro_Leon_Ramos
Pedro_Leon_Ramos
5 days ago
Replied to Binge_Reader69

Some readers might feel frustrated when a story pauses, seemingly without progressing the plot. However, these moments are not wasted—they are essential for building atmosphere, tension, emotional depth, and immersion. 1. **Atmosphere and Immersion** - Stories aren’t just about what happens; they’re also about how they feel. A well-placed pause can deepen the reader’s connection to the world. A character watching the rain, a candle flickering in the dark, or the distant sound of an unfamiliar creature—these moments create mood and make the setting feel alive. 2. **Reflection and Emotional Impact** - A character’s silent contemplation after a major event can be more powerful than any dialogue. Stories need space for emotions to settle, for characters to process, and for readers to absorb the weight of what has happened. 3. **Building Tension and Anticipation** - A good story knows when to *hold its breath*. Sometimes, the moments before something happens are more nerve-wracking than the event itself. A hero waiting in the dark, the quiet before a revelation, a predator observing its prey—these pauses build suspense and make the eventual action hit harder. 4. **Realism and Pacing** - In real life, not everything moves at full speed. Quiet, slower moments add contrast to action-packed sequences, making them stand out more. If a story constantly rushes forward, it can become exhausting and lose its emotional weight. These moments of "stillness" aren’t about wasting time; they serve to make the journey richer, deeper, and more impactful. A well-crafted story isn’t just a series of events—it’s the experience of living within a world, and sometimes, that means stopping to *breathe*.

Pedro_Leon_Ramos
Pedro_Leon_Ramos
1 months ago
Commented

She was fortunate not to have wings, as having them would have introduced significant disadvantages. The first major weakness would be her lack of aerial visual adaptation. Birds of prey and other flying predators possess exceptional eyesight, allowing them to spot targets on the ground with incredible precision. Without this keen perception, she would have struggled to detect threats from below, making her an easy target for long-range attacks, such as rocks or arrows. The higher she flew, the more the ground would blur into indistinct shapes, further hindering her ability to react to ambushes or unexpected projectiles. Moreover, flight would introduce the constant risk of attacks aimed directly at her wings. Predatory birds use their claws not only to deliver lethal strikes but also to cripple the wings of their opponents, sending them plummeting to their doom. Without a way to shield her wings or the combat experience to evade such strikes, she would have been especially vulnerable to a sudden, deadly fall. Lastly, flying requires far more than just wings; it demands strength, balance, and mastery of maneuverability. Initially, her lack of specialized muscles and practice would have severely limited her ability to control speed, perform evasive actions, or navigate complex environments like forests and canyons. Until those skills were honed, even the smallest mistake could have catastrophic consequences. Without wings, she is spared these perils. What might seem a blessing could easily have become a curse, as the sky would have been her most dangerous battlefield instead of a place of freedom.

Pedro_Leon_Ramos
Pedro_Leon_Ramos
1 months ago
Commented

Yes, I'm a biology nerd

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Pedro_Leon_Ramos
11 months ago
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Yes

Pedro_Leon_Ramos
Pedro_Leon_Ramos
1 years ago
Commented

1

Pedro_Leon_Ramos
Pedro_Leon_Ramos
1 years ago
Commented

I can't join discord with the code it keeps saying it's not valid

Pedro_Leon_Ramos
Pedro_Leon_Ramos
1 years ago
Commented

I don't think anyone noticed that rukia and izzy DxD look the same just change that izzy looks like an older version of rukia

Pedro_Leon_Ramos
Pedro_Leon_Ramos
Pedro_Leon_Ramos
Pedro_Leon_Ramos
2 years ago
Commented

can you please add me on serve because the link doesn't work anymore

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