i like the story but i hate that the mc life is too smooth. Not even working hard to get power. well overall everything is okay except how he becomes strong and how much trusting everyone is around him..
what inspired you?
I've only read 3 chapters so far and gonna put it on hold for now but can any one spoil me a bit.. what chapter can he actually control his body properly.. just i hate it.. i feel like im reading a person stuck in viewer mode in a body.
thats such an interesting start. I like how you tell the whole history first
the mc is so irritating to me i cant take it anymore im gonna drop it for now and maybe pick it back up few months laters for a second chance to me.. and i hate that he swears too much.
is it just me or basically his becoming the guardian of knowledge itself.. well i guess thats why he picked him and he left for a vacation cuz a found a replacement.
why do i feel deja vu reading this chapter. i feel like ive read this somewhere before this exact exchange of thought and rewarding.
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Eastern · Adelle_oo_