Cha0sTheory - Profile

Lol, good thing I'm my own boss. Though lets hope the anonymity of the internet holds. There will be some akward conversations with my people otherwise.

Honestly, might be the best Harry Potter ff I've read, and I've read a lot. I actually was late to a meeting I was running because I got too caught up in the story. Did feel guilty as hell making up excuses about traffic, haha. I'd sign up for a reasonablly priced patreon as well. Hopefully the author doesn't drop.

Overall was an interesting story, but the inconsistencies with MC "character development" seem overboard, and had me lose interest. Without spoiling too much, chapter 27 was too much. MC goes on and on about not wanting to be referred to as a monster, and lo and behold acts like a monster.

Been awhile since I read, one of his FF, but the ones I have read have been excellent. p.s. Not updated in 22 days, hopefully this isn't a concern?

I rated this lower prior; however, I didn't drop and it has gotten more interesting. Ill stick with it a while longer (and update my review for now)

It started very strongly; however, the last 10 or chapters have been horribly boring. Effectively, a poor rehash of the exact events which happened in the book, without a slightest change. If I wanted a long summary, I'd just reread the actual book. The first 50 or so chapters where actually very interesting, had a distinct plot, but then he entered Hogwarts at the beginning of the 2nd book, and became a creepy stalker.

It started strong, but there is so much fanfic protagonist nonsense, that I'm wondering why even bother setting in this particular universe. Could have just made it a stand alone story, idk will read a few more chapters before deciding to continue/drop.

Cliché: I'm low key, now let me buy out half clothing shop for this girl I barely know, even though there will probably be no room for any of the clothes, sizes won't match, etc.bleh

I still think it's too wordy and detail oriented about non important matters (even post chaoter 17)

It's not a bad novel, but the issue is there are so many unnecessary details that I doubt anyone reads. lengthy descriptions on an apartment building taking up more than a chapter, sooo much introspection with lengthy thought processes. etc.If there was more actual story, I probably would have rated this 5 stars.

I know there are a lot of these types of stories, but I did like this take on the whole transmigrated into a video game story.MC seems to be interesting, plot moves fast enough, hopefully its not dropped anytime soon.