M_J_7823

the quality has dropped since the chapter 31 as if it turned into wish fulfillment you need a plan or soft structure I recommend that you watch a couple of videos from Brandon Sanderson on this topic still a great story but I feel like all the potential I saw at the beginning, which is huge You are squandering because you have no vision of where you want to go with the story but those are just my observations as a reader you do what you want, after all, this is your story

You geting beter?

Ready to start again?

I agree, it goes a little too fast, would like to see more interaction with the projects she is working on

Ambrosia? Isn't that for the food?

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Aaaaahhhhh Morreeee!

Try googling: meddling giant that's your answer