Jadedandburned

I just finished reading the chapter where danny sister dealt with the criminals and I hafta say you blew my expectations right out of the water. I thought this was gonna be just a silly, fun story. Starts serious but becomes lighthearted, I thought. No serious consequences for anything probably. But man oh man was I wrong. I thought it would be a little more diluted, but the sister really opened my eyes. This is really, truly a masterpiece.No pulling punches at all. I want to give you 4 outta 5 on updates beccause I want more but I'll let it be for now, you do update daily at least. But please try to write more. 2-3 thousand words a day is too little for me.

author youre insane. i mean truly. how can you do so much in just 20 days? [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

there are many things wrong with this story. but i love it. the worst is the ending. author rushed it badly. i hated it. but it doesnt take away from the charm of the story. another thing i dont like is how the leads character changes time to time. and worst. the world changes to fit her whims. its bad. but the witcher arc carries the story. and also the main pairing. very good. 773 chap finished. it should be 800 for proper end. still recommend.

i like when mc is not trusting and is more human. this story is not perfect for me, but when compare to others i find here its more my taste. the lead is a pessimist in her heart but doesnt make it obvious. my gripe with many is how everyone knows when the lead doesnt trust ppl and its a major plot point to be conquered. no. just dont. some people are shaped by their past, its who they are. they dont trust others easily. and thats ok. you dont need to FIX it. this is why i like the story. the flaws of the lead are there, ok, but the support characters are not out there to fix her to be perfect. they dont even know shes flawed for the most part. why should they? unless a god is whispering their ears. its good.