watch your transitions. insert phrases such as "three possessions later. .. " so we wouldn't be wondering how the team went from offense to offense again. I'll give this book some slack. Maybe the later chapters get better.
you can't grab the ball on jumpball. you tap it to a teammate.
Nalan Mingxue. And it's a bit obvious. She stepped forward knowing he won't say no to her. Only one person has this much confidence around him. She seems to always have him figured out. That rescue mission with the rocket launcher when they were much younger would always have a sweet spot in her heart.
It's obvious when you do a little analysis. Of all the girls, only Mingxue had him figured out. There's also that rescue job with the rocket launcher. That surely left a deep impression with her young heart.
she did have first dibs on his short sword.
Trailing by one point but needing a 3 when there's at least 3 possessions left on the game? Clearly you don't watch enough basketball. Maybe you haven't even played much hoops. Shih Tzus had at least 2 possessions to one for the other team. It's not yet time to get desperarate and hunt threes.
Basketball System: Rebound of the Underdog
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