Personally, I don't like doing this, but come on, the main character is completely illogical, despite a little change, it's still something that's unbearable. Come on, I didn't see anyone talking, so basically the guy became an orphan at 8 years old, and his sister managed to support him without him having many difficulties, so far so good, however, his mentality is that of a 13-year-old, no matter how antisocial he is, it doesn't justify the way he is, if he had a mental problem it would be different. His sister is an angel, if she were the main character she would be a super person, she can support the house, give her brother an allowance, clean the house and make food, i this in a job without a degree working in the daytime To get an idea of how detestable the MC is, if you put a Chinese young master and the MC side by side, 8 out of 10 people would choose the young master. But it's not all bad, the idea is interesting, you don't find writing errors all the time, the system could be better built but it's not bad, the consistency of the novel is good, well, unless involving the mc
It's not bad, just some structures that look weird
Lein emphasized that merging their floating islands did not mean destroying individual islands. Instead, it meant staying within the same area so that if any member needed help, others could quickly provide support. This created a strong sense of community and solidarity among members.
Floating Island - Triple S Talent
Games · Riski_Bambang
It looks like a lot of response from the gpt chat, while I'm not against it, maybe a change in them could be more interesting, I wasn't going to comment, but since I've already gotten this far
Lein emphasized that merging their floating islands did not mean destroying individual islands. Instead, it meant staying within the same area so that if any member needed help, others could quickly provide support. This created a strong sense of community and solidarity among members.
Floating Island - Triple S Talent
Games · Riski_Bambang
first can is not necessary, or rather, it does not make sense
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While everyone is Cultivating, I am playing an RPG game
Fantasy · Small_Otaku
. ≠ , higher up Those in the middle of the sentence, without need
When 5 of those hawk Monsters got killed by the Emperor, suddenly other Monsters realized what was happening. so they wanted to turn around to counterattack. Unfortunately for them, before they can do anything almost 20 bullets hit those remaining 5 Monsters.
While everyone is Cultivating, I am playing an RPG game
Fantasy · Small_Otaku
techer or teacher? the discord link is expired, you have to put it so it doesn't expire
Chapter 9 - Hugged from Teacher Michael
While everyone is Cultivating, I am playing an RPG game
Fantasy · Small_Otaku
There are several of these throughout, but everything in the same paragraph was very strange, I think the only time it was used correctly was at the beginning, man, creating is hard, but don't give up
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While everyone is Cultivating, I am playing an RPG game
Fantasy · Small_Otaku
Did you mean interface?
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While everyone is Cultivating, I am playing an RPG game
Fantasy · Small_Otaku
If this paragraph is correct, it conflicts with the next paragraph, and it appears that Xin was using the stick
Xin then thought that it would be best to battle him with a more serious attacks. Thinking of it, he made his staff to swirl and then prepared for an all-out battle.
Global Awakening: My Clones Have Different Classes
Action · pantserplotter
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original Tales of a Newbie Dungeon Master
In a world that has recently adjusted to the emergence of monsters and magic, a select portion of the population is chosen to shoulder the responsibility of designing and enhancing dungeons, progressively introducing greater challenges and rewards. Their achievements harbor the potential to fulfill their deepest wishes—whether that entails status, wealth, power, or even the elusive prospect of immortality. Embark on the journey of a young individual who has just entered this society, endeavoring to adapt to the new reality and the possibilities that have been bestowed upon them. Join them as they navigate the intricate nuances of this transformed world and bear witness to their voyage toward triumph or adversity. Image generated via AI Discord: https://discord.gg/tfkDUggnSd34 Chs 34 Colecciones
honor*?
Kingdom Building Game: Starting Out With A Million Upgrade Points!
Games · Zurbluris