MIR_Devalanci

MIR_Devalanci

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I am a fantasy novel lover.English isn't my first language.I hope to make friends all over the world

2021-08-02 Se unió Global
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MIR_Devalanci
MIR_Devalanci
2 months ago
Replied to Sphire1707

ok review bomb was too strong word for this. but what are you gonna do though? You don't take kindly to threats? so what? Not going to accept that you messed up you own story? not going to accept that you don't give f to your regular readers? Here is thing bro the best thing you can do for you is to delete my comment. Why? Because you are the one who is profiting from this story not me. Just go around the Wn and see how many stories lost their value just Because the author thought he is THE Guy. We readers can just move from a story to another but writers can't. it's hard for a good idea to come up with and writing a story around it. So accept your mistake and be humble.

MIR_Devalanci
MIR_Devalanci
2 months ago
Commented

kill oliver and aliyah please. i want him to try doing suicide after all those depression.

MIR_Devalanci
MIR_Devalanci
2 months ago
Commented

if they all die after so much then this story doesn’t make sense. By the way what is the motive of this story? What effect does mc have in everything? It sometimes feels like author is writing anything he randomly thought when he woke up from sleep. And sometimes it feels like q story with well connected plot.

MIR_Devalanci
MIR_Devalanci
2 months ago
Replied to Amadeus_MOZART

There is no way to keep absolute peace. Either you follow hashirama or madara style. Either way after that powerful government steps down or dies everything will return to as chaotic as it was.

"This world needs an absolute force to bring true peace."

Konoha's Medical Ninja: One Punch to beat up Madara

Konoha's Medical Ninja: One Punch to beat up Madara

Anime & Comics · INeedRest

MIR_Devalanci
MIR_Devalanci
3 months ago
Commented

We didn't get to see his stats after the timeskip

MIR_Devalanci
MIR_Devalanci
3 months ago
Commented

I think everyone will be able to enjoy the story more if there are no real life references. Make new characters and give them new background. It will be more enjoyable. but if there are references to real life people someone at some point will feel awkward if they see their favourite athlete get defeted.

MIR_Devalanci
MIR_Devalanci
3 months ago
Commented

no please don't kill junko.She is like a breath of fresh air to this story

MIR_Devalanci
MIR_Devalanci
3 months ago
Commented

It gives me young master vibe. My lord this, my lord that. Like those Chinese novels where they always say young master.

MIR_Devalanci
MIR_Devalanci
3 months ago
Commented

I feel so sorry for you. Your novel could become a huge hit if had nice release schedule but unfortunately you have real life situations to handle. Still many like us will be there man.Never drop the story.❤️

MIR_Devalanci
MIR_Devalanci
3 months ago
Replied to Edis_AinAlba

chill

"Let go!" he cried, using his tiny hands to punch me, but I dodged him without any problem.

Reincarnated As The Villainess's Son

Reincarnated As The Villainess's Son

Fantasy · Noob6_writer9

  • The Legends of Hoffenheim FC original

    The Legends of Hoffenheim FC

    Sports SLICEOFLIFE GENIUS

    In a corner of Baden-Württemberg, Germany, there is a group of people looking up at the dazzling starry sky. Watching the bright and dazzling stars under the night. Even from a poor corner, I want to go to the top stage to vent my passion and dreams. Sweat, hard work, smiles, and tears all of those outline a bright future. Football has nothing to do with life and death, but football is higher than life and death! This is not a story of one person, this is a story of a group of people. This group is at the bottom but clamoring about the story of climbing to the apex of Europe. This is a story of creating value and chasing dreams! Note:This is not my creation.I found it in mtl and enjoyed it. So i am publishing it so that others can also enjoy. I would do slight edit here and there and change things slightly. Once again it is not my story so if you don't like it atleast don't vent on me.Thank you

    21 Chs 23 Colecciones

  • Systematic Champion: The Rise of a Wrestling Legend original

    Systematic Champion: The Rise of a Wrestling Legend

    Sports SYSTEM WEAKTOSTRONG

    "Systematic Champion: The Rise of a Wrestling Legend" is a thrilling novel about a low-level wrestler who becomes a legend in the industry. With the help of a revolutionary system, he learns various moves, improves his mic skills, and wins championship after championship. As a young wrestler, the protagonist is frustrated by his lack of success. But when he discovers a secret system that can help him unlock his true potential, everything changes. He trains harder than ever before, perfecting his moves and honing his skills until he becomes unbeatable in the ring. But the journey to the top is not without its challenges. The protagonist must navigate the cutthroat world of professional wrestling, facing off against jealous rivals and corrupt promoters who will stop at nothing to take him down. Despite the obstacles, the protagonist remains determined to achieve his goal: becoming the greatest wrestler of all time. Along the way, he develops deep relationships with his fellow wrestlers, discovers the true meaning of teamwork, and becomes a hero to his legions of fans. "Systematic Champion: The Rise of a Wrestling Legend" is a gripping tale of ambition, perseverance, and triumph over adversity.

    6 Chs 16 Colecciones