Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to the next chapters
It's time for MC to think sustainably, he needs land to breed magical animals and magical plants. His dependence on the wizarding market affects his progress, especially since we know that some plants are extinct on the market because of wizards. note: house elves or golems to take care of crops and animals
I think the only defect is the structure of the text, in some parts it is very confusing. Otherwise it's very good, the author manages to explore the potential of potions well and has a very good world development, he knew how to fit franchises like Tomb Raider very well
If he is already warning others about Diddy's parties why doesn't he gather evidence and report them, it seems easier and more correct
Has he ever messed with iron golems? Another thing, has he already tried to do some automatic resource farm?
So the thousands-year-old MC, who has memories of dead Cybertronians and knows the danger of the universe, did nothing in the thousands of years to prepare? Furthermore, he seems to have an existential crisis about his role in the world? like come on man
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The story is interesting, the only things that bother me are the MC's apparent lack of creativity in using his power (perhaps the author will develop it further) but what bothers me most is the MC's apparent lack of objective, I mean he doesn't he needs to have a grandiose goal or something, but his actions seem disconnected and meaningless, it would be nice to at least know the logic behind these actions
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original Cluster of Fanfic Ideas
A series of fanfic ideas that I hope someone takes to develop, if you also have any ideas and would like to share, leave a comment in the comments sections2 Chs 0 Colecciones
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Arcane: Broken Mechanism
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