It's not every day you encounter something of this quality around the platform. The prose is satisfactory, the characters are quite relatable. The pacing could do some work. A few grammar errors here and there. Writing cliches are around, but they're fine for this genre, I guess. Keep writing!
I love it! It's not every day I encounter something this good on a web novel platform. It's got a decent beginning. An intriguing, mysterious villain. And a likeable protagonist. Added this to my library. You guys should too!
It's a refreshing twist to what I usually am suggested. Most of what I read on the platform is fantasy but this is something else. It's not my typical genre but boy was I hooked!
The characters and worldbuilding are quite interesting. There are some clunky dialogue, pacing, a few grammar mistakes, but they can be easily remedied. Overall, it's a good book for a newbie author.
Hello, Everyone. This is my 2nd novel, which is an entry for WSA 2021. I tried my hand at Transmigration because it seems to be the favorite of Webnovel's reader base. Anyay, I hope you enjoy reading this series as much as I enjoy writing them. I appreciate all reviews - the good because it helps the book rank; the bad because it helps me improve. So please leave a review when you can.
Nice play. It's not just one magic system... There's Earth-based powers and there's Alien-based powers. So which is better? 🤔
Just in case I give the wrong impression. I do not consider myself to be anywhere near as good as Brandon Sanderson or his contemporaries. I'm a fan, so I "patterned" my story after his works. That is all ☺️
It's my first story but I've been holding on to this idea since I was 12 years old and now I'm finally getting it out there. I would appreciate any form of support. If you are into Brandon Sanderson's and his contemporaries' works, I know you will enjoy this story. Give it a shot. As always, thanks for simply being here. 🙂
It's getting interesting. John is so OP. No sign of any major villain yet though, so we can't really make an accurate comparison of his power levels against the other powered beings 🤔
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The fall of House Ellestad marked the end of one era, the Aldren Dominion (AD), and the start of another, the Age of Empires (AE). Some say it was the triumph of light against the forces of evil. Others say it was the end of prosperity and the beginning of darkness. Some say Aldren was the pinnacle of civilization. Others say the Aldren Matriarch was the Dark Queen Lilith herself. It has been 10 years since the Dominion of Aldren fractured into squabbling kingdoms later gobbled up by the surrounding Empires of Eiridan, Obsidian, and Dakkone - the Trinity of Nations that now rule the Continent of Atraidan. The Prodigy Paladin Nash Synestra receives a chilling warning and is sent on a top-secret Imperial mission. Yvaine never wanted to be a mage. But it is what kept her alive since the House Ellestad's fall. Three years into the most prestigious Magic Academy of the Obsidian Empire, she is just a year away from her Revenation. Then she can finally be free from her prison. But everything is not what they seem. First, she struggles with passing her classes. Then she encounters random dreams that may be connected to the new student who seems eerily attracted to her. And Yvaine would soon find herself in the crosshairs of every monarchy in the Empire. _______________________________________________________ I would appreciate your comments so I can improve on my work. Also, please leave a review. This is my first novel so it will definitely need a lot of improvement. But I believe it is better to start and just correct things along the way instead of 'perfecting' your drafts and end up not starting at all. I love Brandon Sanderson's works so if you are into his kind of books, that's what I strive for in this series. Follow the story of Yvaine, Nash, and the other characters in this whole new world I have in store for you. Enjoy. _______________________________________________________ Website: www.antonvalentyne.com Support me with Ko-fi: https://ko-fi.com/antonvalentyne Buy me a coffee: https://www.buymeacoffee.com/antonvalentyne26 Chs 26 Colecciones
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When Jin finds himself in the old world, that is, the world before the Great Flood, a world where magic and legendary beasts still roam the planet, he finds that being a simple boy from Earth does have its perks.2 Chs 5 Colecciones
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Aldren Children Chronicles
Fantasy · antonvalentyne