Omega_Mystery

Omega_Mystery

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2021-07-19 Se unió Global
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Omega_Mystery
Omega_Mystery
1 days ago
Commented

I love the dance distraction. good luck on future endeavors and most importantly have fun while writing.

Omega_Mystery
Omega_Mystery
1 days ago
Commented

this sound like a interesting idea so I think this one is good +1

2) have the original Henry as a vestige, allowing Henry to know his memories and how to use his powers.

my hero academia: the chronicles of Henry stickman

my hero academia: the chronicles of Henry stickman

Anime & Comics · Thelostswordman

Omega_Mystery
Omega_Mystery
3 days ago
Commented

i think he should come clean but maybe also get original Henry's memory as a reward for doing it. something like he completed a hidden choice or something.

Omega_Mystery
Omega_Mystery
4 days ago
Commented

love how playful and mischievous he looks.

Omega_Mystery
Omega_Mystery
5 days ago
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without you we won't get any chapters so take a rest and take care of yourself.

Omega_Mystery
Omega_Mystery
7 days ago
Commented

i love how you are referencing the game and also the friendship between Henry and Charles. good luck on future endeavors and most importantly have fun while writing.

Omega_Mystery
Omega_Mystery
10 days ago
Commented

i love how although he has potential he he to work hard to achieve it fully. it would be cool in the future if once he masters both fighting styles he makes his own by combining them or even just using them as reference.

Omega_Mystery
Omega_Mystery
10 days ago
Commented

a very possessive maybe even jealous wife. although I also like how cute toga acts in this chapter.

(A/N: I saw a YouTube video of himeko toga saying ara ara earlier today and I kinda wanted it to be canon in this story that she says that when she is with Henry.)(also what do you guys think? Should I have toga act like a wife for Henry due to her falling in love with him?)

my hero academia: the chronicles of Henry stickman

my hero academia: the chronicles of Henry stickman

Anime & Comics · Thelostswordman

Omega_Mystery
Omega_Mystery
12 days ago
Commented

I he got two swords he can do star stream burst from Sword art online. I think that's what it's called at least.

Omega_Mystery
Omega_Mystery
12 days ago
Posted

I love this concept and think this book has a lot of potential. it would be cool if in the future there is a moment where he makes his own option. for example if it said save someone or save yourself he said neither and chose to choose both or made an option that said save both through sheer will power. this is just my opinion though so if you like it run with it of you don't the story is still amazing anyway so it won't matter. good luck with future endeavors and most importantly have fun while writing.