See... this chapter was great. 1st and 2nd chapter should be one long chapter, imo. Your choice author 👍
Short first chapter, and MC has already switched to the second setting. I didn't get to know anything, but was only confused about what was happening at the end. May be author is directly picking where he had left his previous book. not sure if it was a great idea. Anyway, writing is extremely good. I wish i could get more info from the first chapter.
Reading thoughts in the same format is quite confusing. Can you separate them using brackets or '. most authors so the same
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Bloodline Ascension
Eastern · DragonKnov
might be you meant *even younger
Four figures walked towards the downed young man overbearingly. The four figures were also four young men, but the one who appears to be the leader of the group was an even older man that looked to be 20 years of age.
Blood Titan System
Fantasy · Typhlix
*had
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Heir of the Crazy Necromancer
Fantasy · Twilight_Lord
some tense issue here
Toke's eyes slightly closed as he listened to the sounds of the ocean, the waves hitting the boat, and the sail fighting the wind. His child is traveling even in the womb. It reminded him of his younger self when he would journey with his late father. His father perished in a bloody battle that Toke unfortunately witnessed. The moment he saw his father get struck by an arrow was the moment he no longer took joy in sailing the seas.
The Pendant Ruin
War · Nitrous
its going over my head
Strangely, I haven't noticed much before. I have a high height for my age and an incredible physique. Well, no wonder. I worked hard after all! I was learning control over hemomancy. Thank God I learned how to disable the passive amplification of the body - so I called it. This way, I trained as before, but I had to continually focus on my weakening. An absurd situation, but even with the amplification turned on, the effect from it increased proportionally.
Harry Potter: New World
Movies · HPMan
that's convenient
There were no special effects, thunder, lightning, flashes of light, or even heat in the chest. Just on my outstretched palm, from out of nowhere, a tiny red ball appeared, which grew to the size of a tennis ball very quickly. Crimson red. The color of blood. And the material of the ball, the liquid, spoke for themselves. Well, I'm not just some lord of tomato juice in the end? Although I shouldn't deny it right away.
Harry Potter: New World
Movies · HPMan
MC had a fling with a character from Game of Thrones, but no true love interest as of yet (I am stockpiling).
lord of the mysteries
He was arguing on social media as a keyboard warrior and suddenly the scene went dark.
Reincarnated As The Strongest Ancestor With a System
Eastern · Dark_Crow1111