Benny_Manatee

Benny_Manatee

male LV 11

Aspiring hobby writer, hope to be full fledged in the future ^^ I like mystery stories, and I do like to write them as well. TC got Silver Prize for WPC #194

2021-06-24 Se unió Hungary
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Benny_Manatee
Benny_Manatee
2 years ago
Replied to Daoist_Iveyflame

Probably will be. Glad you like the story!

Benny_Manatee
Benny_Manatee
3 years ago
Replied to Shirubafokkusuhime

I'm not trying to start a fight either, I just tend to reply in the same style as the critique/comment/whatever. First and foremost, this is a story with superpowers. It's not that it's only about that, rather that aspect is just the means to an end. Characters have a single superpower, that they can manipulate in certain ways. I don't want to spoil anything from later on, but there's a secondary system, but that's not about having a power, rather using your own body in certain ways, according to what you're good at. In that sense, no it's not his only skill. Furthermore, most characters are quite 'creative' with how they use their abilities, thus making them a bit more colorful. But then again, that's the opinion of the author. Take that as you will. And as I said, go ahead, read it until chapter 40, it's free, and if you liked it, go ahead and read more. If you don't like it after that, you don't have to, but please do remember, that I started writing with this work. In the first 40 chapters it shows a lot how inexperienced I was, and after that, I like to think that the quality gets way better. If your problem was only with the premise, tell me, I'll try to figure out a way to make it more appealing.

Benny_Manatee
Benny_Manatee
3 years ago
Replied to Shirubafokkusuhime

Look, to each his own. If you don't wanna read it, don't. If you do, go for it. Saying that a story is dull, before giving it a read is kinda arrogant, or naive. Can't decide. Don't mean to be rude, just judging you based on a comment.

Benny_Manatee
Benny_Manatee
3 years ago
Replied to ib_z

I think it sounds cool lol

"I'll take that name, Francis. Call me [Tentazione]!"

Temptation Chronicles

Temptation Chronicles

Urban · Benny_Manatee

Benny_Manatee
Benny_Manatee
3 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

Benny_Manatee
Benny_Manatee
3 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

Benny_Manatee
Benny_Manatee
3 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

Benny_Manatee
Benny_Manatee
3 years ago
Replied to R3vfor

Thanks for your constructive criticism! Really do appreciate it!

Benny_Manatee
Benny_Manatee
3 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

Benny_Manatee
Benny_Manatee
3 years ago
Replied to high_men

I'm gonna update the synopsis, I guess lol There's nothing of that sort really planned. MC does Temptation in other ways, and usually doesn't use his powers to tempt anyone into his bed.

  • Temptation Chronicles original

    Temptation Chronicles

    Urban ACTION ADVENTURE COMEDY ANTIHERO HIGHIQ

    4.6

    --AUTHOR'S NOTICE-- I regret to inform you, that as of Monday, 10.01.2022, I'm putting Temptation Chronicles on Pause. I came to the conclusion, that as of now, I'm unable to continue writing, due to several issues coming up as of late. These include, but aren't limited to: University Graduation work, Exams, as well as Monetary Issues. I'll try my best to get back onto writing as soon as possible, however this most likely won't happen at least until June 2022. Once I've graduated, I might continue writing this story, given that I'll have the time to do it in my free time. Another thing I've noticed, is that ever since I've started writing, my enthusiasm for this story has been on a steady decline. The issue isn't that I don't think highly of it, which I definitely do, it's a more personal reason. I don't think that it's up to par with what I envisioned for it, as well as having to write in a style I personally don't really like. I hope to see you once again, when I'm back writing, until then, please enjoy the story up to the current point. See you this summer (probably)! You know you want it. Come on, click on it. Give in to [Temptation]. Born into a family of heroes, Dan Atys, son of some of the top heroes of the world, was an absolute [Low Tier] loser. Getting bullied was his bread day in and out. What do you think happens to someone like that? I mean, he was raised by heroes, groomed to be one. You'd think he'd turn into one as well, right? Turns out, Dan thought not. The abuse has messed with his mind, and even his powers didn't seem to affect the people who blindly follow principles. His power, [Temptation] , is a superpower that affects the mind of the afflicted. The only condition that is needed to be fulfilled, is that Dan wills it so. Up to this point tho, he thought it's a charm effect, that has a positive effect on those surrounding him. This usually worked this way, but for some reason, ever since he enrolled into the prestigious School of Herocraft, Heracleon, named after the first superhero in history, his powers didn't seem to affect anyone. No one wanted to be friends with him, and all the affection he had from others, was through extreme abuse. They wouldn't just beat him up, they would torture him both physically, and mentally. So much for those "heroes." After realising his true potential, the ability to manipulate just about anyone in the world, he thought it would be natural for him, to "stray" from the path of "heroes."  ---DISCALIMER--- We've had a few people clicking on TC, because they were expecting some sexual/explicit [Temptation] content. There's nothing of that sort going on! Please, read the synopsis if you're interested in the story, and if it caught your eyes, please, do give the story a read. Thank you. --- WPC #194 Silver Prize Cover Design: @kincesco (Instagram)

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