The fish after inhaling air
A small fish, the size of a thumb, suddenly surfaced to breathe.
Eastern · Carcass Ant
I think you mean eyes as dark as their fur istead of eyes as darks as their eyes.
'What the fuck are these! Why do they look like an evil-looking Bigfoot.'' Lex thought to himself as he watched them. Their eyes were as dark as their eyes, which creeped him out. They were tall and muscular but had sharp talons at the end of her arms.
Fantasy · NegansPalace
I would change amateur runner to beginner runner. As he is basiscly already a runner.
ch 46 The Runners Council
Fantasy · NegansPalace
thanks for the interesting chapter!
ch 40 Bloodlust
Fantasy · NegansPalace
thanks for the chapter
ch 37 Thunderous Boom
Fantasy · NegansPalace
Thanks for the great chapter!
ch 36 Fangmaw
Fantasy · NegansPalace
Thanks for the chapter!
ch 34 I Am Grateful
Fantasy · NegansPalace
thanks for the great chapter! You can really feel the panic and seriousness in the battle.
ch 33 Fated To Change The World
Fantasy · NegansPalace
the chapter is double, you already have al this infk in ch. 4
ch 0 4 Chapter 2: Making a Small Fortune
Urban · Write a book and make a fool of yourself
I couldn't find any mistakes. Looks like a great chapter
ch 31 Hiding
Fantasy · NegansPalace
thank you for the wonderfull chapter!
ch 426 Little Lady
Fantasy · NegansPalace
thanks for the great chapter
ch 24 The Silent Fort
Fantasy · NegansPalace
thanks for the interesting chapter!
ch 23 Outcropping
Fantasy · NegansPalace
when are the new chapters coming?
ch 21 The Battle Of The Giants (2)
Fantasy · NegansPalace
Thanks for the chapter!
ch 191 Chapter 191: Feast With Freyja and Her Husband
Fantasy · LuxVonDeux
thanks for the great chapter
ch 21 The Battle Of The Giants (2)
Fantasy · NegansPalace
its a really good book, the character development is really great. The writer knows exactly how get tou as reader immerserd in not only the story but also in the world behind the story. Altough there haven't been new updates on the story, it is still worth reading this as it is just such a good book.
The Chosen's Odyssey
Fantasy · Unorthadox01