Francisco_Jimenez_2421

You didn't even tell doom you were an uchiha so how he called you uchiha

Why do you keep calling pietro jerome

Calling homelander azu confused me.You describe him as azu but clark was calling him john so is azu just bad translation?

Quick question parallel world 1 hashirama and tobirama.Parallel world 2 tobirama averted death.Parallell world 3 just saved minato .So unless you jumped all the way to churning exams in parallel world 3 isn't this actually number 4?

Love the story just one thing in this chapter the jedi didn't think dooku fell to the dark side till the clone wars.This is before then.They considered him but of the lost 20.The jedi who choose to left the order but don't consider him fallen yet

No patchface?ahhh thought your character would sense him an his connection to the drowned god

Introducing sayians might be too much

We believe you just heal and rest up

Your not dead and you updated my favorite story you have ty :)

Envy.Hes doing alot better then the show showing alicent envy of rhaenyra.Alicent is jealous of her freedom that she never has.She always had to do what her father want marry a man she doesn't want and everything else.While Rhaenrya always shirks her responsibilities and could whatever she wants damn the consequences.Alicent wants rhaenryas freedom