antoblackdeath

very good so far i like to see how the rest of the story goes

i second that this has alot of potential to become great

that's was a loving chapter thank you and keep up the good work

good job keep up the hard work

keep up the great work :)

good but can be better

great 1st chapter the main character starts at humble beginnings has to get every advantage possible to stay alive and grow all and all thank you

hi like the story but just a little criticism the sentence of a the new demigod you should take out either the or a that way the words would fell smoother anyway thanks for your hard work

keep up the good work

thumbs up