Tbh you can never please people. Despite thorfinn winning 90% of the battles he’s been in people think he’s weak because he lost to Dahlia. People really expect a teenager to beat a near immortal witch. (Oh but he beat the leviathan). Without the gods he would’ve been dead before he even saw him, in fact he was going to die but Freyr saved him. It’s sad when characters you like die, but what would you expect a character like Dahlia to do when a peasant managed to get one over on her. If things had gone another way and they beat Dahlia back, do you think she would’ve stopped coming? No she would’ve kept coming until she got what she wanted. Btw none of this is directed at you I was just getting kinda annoyed by people who seem to think this is a fairy tale story or by the majority of the others who want it to be a power wank. Anyway I’m probably gonna take a break from this fic for a bit and focus on my other ones. 👍🏻
(AN: So that's the end boys. Well, not really the end, but next chapters just gonna be an epilogue, a few explanations of how Hild was able to trick Dahlia what Thorfinn will be doing during the four year timeskip yada yada yada. I'm sure some of you will be a little upset at Hilds death, but I don't say things for no reason they will meet again in the future. Morgyn will also be an important character as I'm sure some of you can recognise the name Morgyn... Morganna, Morgan Le Fay. You guys know where this is going hehehehehehe, anyways I hope you enjoyed this Arc.)
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Everything from a different universe is adapted to fit into the base universe.
"They formed an alliance... with the Saiyan Empire," Hal said gravely.
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If it’s not logical for the MC to be beaten he won’t be. By the time his son is a grown man Thorfinn will be an Original Vampire. Their relationship will be complicated, but they will have bigger things to worry about than each other.
Mikael nearly broke the handle of his axe he gripped it so tightly. "I will never forgive you for taking my daughter from me and using her in whatever sick ritual you use to empower yourself! I will avenge her Dahlia!"
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Ages have been changed from canon.
Son of the Sea and Skies
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I’m not a fan of multiverse things but yeah there probably will be.
(AN: That's it buddies this is the end of the Arc. Next arc is the Interstellar war arc, but before that a mini arc where Mark finally gets his full memories back and learns to adjust to life as a father as well as living with the death of his friends. Other stuff that I've teased will be happening as well such as Galatea and the Viltrumites attacking. Anyway I hope you enjoyed the arc. I'm out.)
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Nah man I just finished writing the next five chapters, got the whole next arc planned out.
Pretty sure that’s what the force is 🤷🏻♂️
"I don't have weeks I have days!" He shouted at her as he started coughing again.
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It’s nice to see feedback that is actually genuine. It was a difficult chapter to write cause at the end he’s basically 11 and so It wasn’t easy to balance fantasy and reality. maybe the mistakes came off as forced but it was more me accounting for him being green and having next to no battle experience. When it comes to him in Valyria not much of what he did was related to swordplay. If I remember rightly apart from Valar he only fought one person with a sword and that was one of the infected pale men (I don’t really count the worms). It’s easy to see why you think he’s weaker but in reality he’s not, he had help from Vermax back in Valyria. Most of this arc is developing him by himself so he isn’t just reliant on his dragon. After the time skip he’ll be a lot more skilled in both swordplay and a bit of magic. Anyway thanks for the comment, glad you liked the story. 😁
That already happened and it was Corde who died in that instance. At least according to the films 🤷🏻♂️
(AN: So another big reveal, in this story during the events of the phantom menace it was Sabe who went with Qui-gon to Mos Eisley and met Anakin. She also took Padmes place during the events of attack of the clones when Jango tried to kill Padmé. So yeah Anakin married Sabe and Padmé is still single. I wonder what that means... heheheheheehehehheheh sex most likely. Anyway I hope you enjoyed the chapter.)
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Leviathan is a divine being, there is leeway for the gods to help otherwise they are mostly forbidden from interfering. The fact that you’d be happier reading a novel where the gods show up every time he’s in trouble makes me think you need to read something else boyo 🤫
(AN: So that's the end boys. Well, not really the end, but next chapters just gonna be an epilogue, a few explanations of how Hild was able to trick Dahlia what Thorfinn will be doing during the four year timeskip yada yada yada. I'm sure some of you will be a little upset at Hilds death, but I don't say things for no reason they will meet again in the future. Morgyn will also be an important character as I'm sure some of you can recognise the name Morgyn... Morganna, Morgan Le Fay. You guys know where this is going hehehehehehe, anyways I hope you enjoyed this Arc.)
Fighting, Honour and Valhalla || Vikings x Originals x TVD Fic
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