the plot has so many holes in it, and the Mc develops fare to fast. There is no real struggle for growth and makes fore a really cringe story, and the plot is almost similar to only I level up I love the concept of your story but I think u need to start over ik you can do better.
yall stop hating its not easy doing this day after day tbh the amount of work that wase put I to this book in the time it's been released others haven't ben able to do half as much evean world famus authors will strugle writing a single paige a day fore one I love reading this book so it's amazing so I don't mind whating fore the chapters to be fixed thayr tring ther best and evean if thay weren't matters not bc they've still managed to post a wonderful book and author your doing g so amazing love whare your taking this story keep it up don't fret ab what your other readers say and don't stress ab the chapters so much bc it's such a good book not a lot of peaple are going tk complane if you need to take some time to work out the story and fix chapters those that do aren't really into the book to begin with. keep it up love the book Def one of my favorite
I hate when this happens but your tring your best and you've done amazing keep up the good work and I don't blame you you've been working so hard on this book
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ya, he wase, and he fought 3 on 1 in it, too, and didn't struggle one bit. and didn't he use inscriptions in ways nobody else could by fusing elements into a single inscription he hasent done that since the righter first wrote ab it.
Grey was taken aback when he saw the arena before him, he didn't expect that the Lyttelton Family would have an arena of their own. He could guess what his grandfather wanted since he told him to come with him and this was the place he took him to.
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