Yarakiri

Yarakiri

male LV 14
2021-04-23 Se unió France
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Yarakiri
Yarakiri
6 months ago
Commented

The coincidence of the perfect arrival to prevent Kaleb's death, really not phew....

Yarakiri
Yarakiri
8 months ago
Replied to SpoiledSecrets

Frankly the rating of this novel does not reflect reality as almost always on Webnovel...

Professor Godfrey's gaze then shifted to a blond youth with blue eyes who was standing with his arms crossed and had an extremely smug look on his face. This boy was none other than Jeffrey!

Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

Fantasy · Esenel

Yarakiri
Yarakiri
8 months ago
Replied to Ron1n

No worries, I recommend “New Life: A Second Chance”, a very good novel.

Yarakiri
Yarakiri
8 months ago
Replied to michele_00

So true! So much potential ruined, and it just keeps getting worse. I hope a lot from his harem dies but given the way the story is going, that will never happen. The only time I enjoy reading is the passages with Zuhei and Su Mei and the ascendant primes in general. The rest is just trash.

Yarakiri
Yarakiri
9 months ago
Commented

I'm sick and tired of this harem..... it's ruining the whole story.

Yarakiri
Yarakiri
10 months ago
Replied to HideousGrain

Not summon something he absolutely needs every time. Like for example a basic 4 star warrior, nothing more. He was unlucky and that's it. Don't do it with a 4 star summon which has incredible potential and which would also strangely solve the monkey problems which took place 2 chapters before. If everything fits like that it's too easy, your story has no life if that's the case. This is real advice that I give you to take your story to the next level.

Yarakiri
Yarakiri
10 months ago
Commented

This kind of coincidence that ruins the whole story...

Yarakiri
Yarakiri
10 months ago
Commented

Really this novel is destroyed by the harem.... Everything is grandiose and well organized but nothing is reflected on the romance, same error as with all the other xianxia....

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