Great story! Keep 'em comin'.
there are a few grammatical and punctuation errors, however, so far, the writing is pretty good. I look forward to more chapters, in the future.
Could be more grammatically accurate, however, it's plot and character development is promising. I hope the author continues their progressive improvements, as the storyline proceeds.
Way to keep a person hanging! Hope there's more, soon.
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Fantasy · Mahmud1321