Yes!
I think you're making Alex too powerful. If he could locate all enemies, he would be unable to defeat
Exactly what I thought, UI mean I expects him to be more techno related or even Asgardian related, I mean, he's a gamer right
Nice setting, the plot is good and the story keeps me going
you have a great character development,I love the Henry Walton character
interesting chapter,you did a good job
Tell me what you think of this chapter
"The Cursed"
Fantasy · Tempest_Books