1. Writing Quality: I have only read about 51 chapters so far, summary of the story mc donated his heart to the girl he loved but she didn't love him because of the fate that was affecting her and making everyone from the main cast of the novel ignore him. there is heavy use of ai to make this novel, idk if the author decreased the use further in the story or not. he goes back in time but the twist is that everyone other than the mc of the novel he lives in also goes back. poor execution of the concept. 2. Story development: it's like a wish fulfilment, where everyone in the past ignored him, realised what they did and tried to make it up to him. that too is badly executed. 3. Character design: it would have been enjoyable if there was no heavy use of ai, which repeats what the characters realized in first 10 chapters for the next 50 chapters. mc would constantly say he is tired 3 or 4 times every chapter. 4. Update Stability: Don't know, didn't reach that far to check it out. 5. World background: confusing, in the first 50 chapters we only know about the big families that controls the world nothing other than that just small details. Overall: if u have nothing to read, (absolutely nothing) then you should read this to pass the time, tho there is effort from the author to make this concept work but it would have been more enjoyable if the mc and f-mc were the only ones that regressed, it would have made the novel much more engaging. if i read this novel further in the future I will update the review or write a new one. if anyone has a novel or ff suggestions plz comment down below i need stuff to read.
not like i can do anything about it.
hmm, i would suggest them being friends/enemies. it would be a good thing to write and good practice for the author as well. a love hate relationship (tho no homo plz)
not like i have anything worth selling, the only thing they can do is to mess with me
1. Writing Quality: good the story is not just wish fulfilment. it is balanced in its own way tho the mc is still overpowered. 2. Story Development: it is developed in a stable manner and well it's good i would say. 3. Character design: I won't say it's the best or anything like that however it is not the worst either I would scale it a solid 7/10. 4. Update Stability: story got updated 16 hours ago from what i can see. 5. World background: stable. i would say. as for harem no one would just fall for mc, it is set on realistic standards up till now. ⚠️if you have any suggestions for ff or novel please tell me. i would be internally greatful ⚠️
hmm it is, imagine someone posting ur ip online, next you know ur search history, ur name, ur parents name, phone number etc are available to anyone who knows about ur ip and ur fucked. hackers are scary, just saying.
if i knew how to hack i would have tracked ur ip just for extra chapters
1.Writing Quality: rather the translator is quite good, it is a really good translation so far. 2.Story development : I won't let you get bored easily, I don't really like Haram however this is an exception, it is written quite well. 3.Character design: it is a chinese ff however the translator has done quite a good job, there is no Chinese brainwashed propaganda involved. 4.Updating Stability : don't know i read it all in one sitting. 5. World Background: a perfect blend of different anime worlds i would say. ⚠️Over all evaluation: this is a really good read, I would suggest it. give it a read and you will come to love it. if anyone has a ff or a novel to suggest please comment them down below.⚠️
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original Abyss Holder
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In the desolate urban sprawl, there existed a boy named Steven – a name as commonplace as the concrete beneath his worn-out shoes. His figure, terribly slender, bore the weight of days without sustenance, a stark reflection of the harsh life within the shadows of the towering skyscrapers. His disheveled appearance spoke of deprivation; his clothing, little more than rags haphazardly sewn together, clung to his meager frame. Steven's features, though obscured by grime, revealed a haunting contrast. His black hair, adorned with a few rebellious red strands, framed a face marked by hardship. His pupils, black with a faint but discernible red tint, mirrored the desolation etched into his soul. Staring into the familiar darkness that enveloped his existence, Steven couldn't help but voice the silent question that echoed in his mind, "When is this going to end?" The abyss, seemingly attuned to his despair, responded with a transformative touch. The surroundings, once stagnant and oppressive, began to shift and change before him, trapping him in a perpetual cycle of witnessing his own tragic past unfold. Transported back to the age of six, Steven found himself amidst the warmth of familial joy, his parents' and his own expressions radiating happiness. Yet, even in the midst of this fleeting respite, the relentless cycle persisted, as if destiny reveled in replaying the moments that fueled the flames of his recurrent nightmares. Fighting against the inexorable pull of his haunting memories, Steven, like a slum-bound ghost, yearned for an end to the perpetual loop. The city's towers cast long shadows over his struggle, and the contrast between the opulence above and his desolation below fueled his determination for a better life. In the midst of this dire reality, Steven's path took an unexpected turn when he made the resolute decision to enlist in the military. The armed forces, a gateway to opportunity and escape from the slum's oppressive grasp, promised a chance to break free from the shackles of his impoverished past. Little did Steven know that his journey would extend far beyond the familiar streets of the slums. The military, equipped with advanced technology and knowledge of other dimensions, opened doors to realms previously unimaginable. As he explored new universes and studied the cosmic mysteries, Steven's quest for a better life evolved into a cosmic odyssey, challenging not only the limits of his physical existence but also the boundaries of reality itself. Throughout this transformative journey, Steven, emotionally reserved and scarred by the echoes of his past, found solace in the bonds forged amidst the trials of the military. Trust and love became the cornerstones of his emotional awakening, as he learned to unveil the layers of vulnerability hidden beneath his stoic exterior. As Steven navigates the interwoven tapestry of action, tragedy, romance, sci-fi, adventure, and dimensions, the narrative expands to reflect the complexity of his existence. The story, no longer confined to the limitations of the slums, becomes a symphony of emotions, echoing the resilient spirit of a young man determined to transcend the shadows of his past and embrace the limitless possibilities that unfold across the cosmic expanse.162 Chs 382 Colecciones
1. Writing Quality: I don't have any complaints, I have read 100 chapters and after that started stacking, you should write ur own novels, the writing Quality is really good. 2. Story Development: One of the most engaging FFS i have ever read so far just fking wow, what the f do you take before you write and can I have some??? 3. Character Design: They feel real when you read, they don't feel like they are fictional characters. 4. Update Stability: when I was reading there were multiple chapters coming out daily. 5. World Building: nice it takes place during the World war, author has given life to the world itself. overall: I have rarely read a ff this good, if you write any other novels please do tell mate i would love to read them. if anyone has any suggestions for novels and FF then comment them down below.
Harry Potter: I am the Legend
Book&Literature · Glimmer09