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The best chapter, which in my opinion is the best of your fic. Good writing and good handling of the characters, if I had to add something it would be that Aurora's thoughts are not heard, only her Words spoken, those in celeste were heard because she doesn't know how to speak yet or else I imagine you will forget about her. This is constructive criticism and advice. Amazing chapter keep up the good work 👍

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Massss chapterssssdd

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I want him to go back to her 👍

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Chapters too short 😭

And the explanation and details of the battles feel boring and he explains it as if he is in a hurry to finish the explanations of the battles

Good chapter

*Celeste

It's not to criticize or offend, it's just my personal opinion and taste, but I didn't like the Cid and Yukihime chapters at all, it bored me so much that it quickly scrolls up hoping that halfway through the chapter Chapter they will show other characters, I don't know why but she seems like a very boring character to me. My favorite part was also the light blue ones, which is why I asked for more screen time. I hope the Next chapter looking forward to Yukihime not appearing on screen so much 🙏

Good chapter