Klillo

Klillo

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2021-04-17 Se unió Germany
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Klillo
Klillo
12 days ago
Posted

it's my personal opinion so no offense intended. status ch 29. there are few spelling and grammar mistakes and they don't bother while reading. the writing style is easy to understand and follow. the story is a little bit slow but starts to advance now. I guess the introduction is over. while I'm not a fan of multiple povs I'll read through it because im curious about that uncommon power. it's something different from the rest that we get to see like devouring or so. as of now the character templates are not fully completed but it's like MC is an extra next to the side character MC (typical son of destiny). for "just" 30 chapters iIwont write about updating stability. might be just author newfound motivation because of a new creation. the world is a typical cultivation world but it's not much known yet. I like those tho so I give 4stars.

Klillo
Klillo
25 days ago
Replied to Dr_Dred

+1

Klillo
Klillo
25 days ago
Commented

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One by one, Daimon walked across the stage, repeating this process for each warlord. As each soul was absorbed, he could feel his own strength increase by the smallest margin. It was not enough to cause a significant difference, but it was still something.

Star Wars: Daimon's Story

Star Wars: Daimon's Story

Movies · Dr_Dred

Klillo
Klillo
1 months ago
Replied to Dr_Dred

it's not about the cloning even tho I misunderstood. it's about depth of the world. no one would like Warhammer 40k if primarchs were mass produced u know. force users are valuable in star wars but that action devalues them greatly. and it wouldn't be too bad for the story of MC could just create a practice method that usable for people with like 3 or 4k midichlorians. they aren't able to actively use force as one needs to have like 5k or so if I remember correctly. and coupled with maybe something like echani they could still be the mainstay of the army

Next were the Force Scions. They would be the Elite legions of soldiers serving under their respective Progenitor. While limited in number due to how dangerous it was to keep just creating Force Users which would disturb the balance within the Force, the Force Scions would be the ultimate warriors.

Star Wars: Daimon's Story

Star Wars: Daimon's Story

Movies · Dr_Dred

Klillo
Klillo
1 months ago
Commented

Darth nihilus and two other sith also brought down the Jedi order to a few dozen or less ig. that was after the mandalorian wars. the order only survived cuz a former Jedi in exile killed those sith

A.N: Damn, that number surprised me, Apparently the Jedi order has never been properly destroyed like this since its founding, attacked-hell yes, nearly crippled-sure, but this kind of annihilation, never (at least from what i could find). Well, this was long and i hope you all enjoyed it :) 

The Eternal Emperor

The Eternal Emperor

Movies · Phantom17

Klillo
Klillo
1 months ago
Commented

i think that he should take a similar path to Warhammer 40k when it comes to force scions/astartes. In order for them not to be influenced by the force they should be "forceless". instead going through a brutal training regimen comparable to that of palpatines guards. Cuz just cloning force users is just not a real order like Jedi or the sith alliances. or is it cuz of plot that u want them to be influenced and get some traitor legions?

Next were the Force Scions. They would be the Elite legions of soldiers serving under their respective Progenitor. While limited in number due to how dangerous it was to keep just creating Force Users which would disturb the balance within the Force, the Force Scions would be the ultimate warriors.

Star Wars: Daimon's Story

Star Wars: Daimon's Story

Movies · Dr_Dred

Klillo
Klillo
1 months ago
Commented

why not riot ? fifteen years of balancing experience

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Cortana sighed as she had just come up with the perfect name, yet Daimon wanted something else. "Alright, then how about the Balance Keepers or the Eternal Guardians," Cortana offered even more suggestions. Daimon sighed and leaned back into his chair thinking about the two names.

Star Wars: Daimon's Story

Star Wars: Daimon's Story

Movies · Dr_Dred

Klillo
Klillo
1 months ago
Commented

+1

Klillo
Klillo
1 months ago
Replied to HerrSpawn

that's exactly what I mean. it's called character development. don't forget that he kills without batting an eye what most people would also call a burden or at least something they need to overcome

"Time to fuse this beauty," he murmured. He closed his eyes briefly before placing the eye-shaped Gu over his own left eye. As it made contact, the Gu seemed to liquefy, spreading across his eye socket like warm ink.

Reverend Insanity: The Gacha System

Reverend Insanity: The Gacha System

Book&Literature · Silent_Kill_

Klillo
Klillo
1 months ago
Commented

i thought he's suspended

We were currently on our lunch break, and he seemed fascinated by Hansu's work on my face.

Lookism :The True King

Lookism :The True King

Anime & Comics · Soul_Eater_0252