literl010

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2021-04-12 Se unió Global
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literl010
literl010
2 months ago
Replied to FIGHTING_GAMER

Please don't, it doesn't really fit

literl010
literl010
2 months ago
Replied to TheLonelyGod

If you really think this author is done with Raven, you're too pure and innocent for this world.

literl010
literl010
2 months ago
Commented

Most fics don't survive a rewrite. Hope that's not the case with this one.

literl010
literl010
2 months ago
Commented

I do enjoy this, but Lux seems to be taking such a back seat that he can barely be called the protagonist at this point. All the action scenes and most of the character interactions go to other characters. I know one of his traits is laziness, but it's getting to the point where he's the least interesting character and only makes appearances when smut happens.

literl010
literl010
2 months ago
Commented

I really enjoyed the first 100 chapters or so. But now there's seemingly no more plot, no more fun battle of wits between the characters, no more interesting relationship development. Just every chapter is raqe after raqe after raqe.

literl010
literl010
literl010
literl010
2 months ago
Commented

I feel like this has switched to an entirely different world after the time skip. MC is different, character dynamics are different, locations are different, new tech introduced... I'm getting whiplash.

literl010
literl010
2 months ago
Commented

No worries, get well soon.

literl010
literl010
3 months ago
Commented

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After school ended and all the students had left, Leo was heading out when he noticed a commotion in one of the classrooms. Curious, he peeked inside and saw two old men, one of whom had his long white beard stuck in a pencil sharpener. The same man who he had seen talking about "paddling" the students earlier that day.

The Simpsons: New Neighbor

The Simpsons: New Neighbor

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