was going good up until chapter 8, author has placed a pay wall. need to pay them if you want to read any more of the chapters, and each new chapter released is a copy and paste saying you need to pay. so everyone who wants to read you only have 8 chapters to read, as all the other chapters are not on this site. can understand having a patreon for people to support and read a few chapters ahead of others. But straight up placing a pay wall for a fanfiction sucks, you are just pushing people away from your story.
You would think he would have gained at least some increase to his template progress through this war.
homelander probably
"I do not fear pain or death, Father." Saint Gilles smiled instead, "Besides, I've been itching to teach that tight-suit-wearing clown a lesson!"
From The Boys to Warhammer 40k
Movies · Mutter
If you are here for Warhammer, there is only up to chapter 5 before it goes to mc travelling to Fate anime. The warhammer side is very fast passed and lots are glossed over so the mc can fast finish his mission and get into Fate, which seems to be what the story is really about. Personally, this is where it just got boring for me. Again, this is me personally as I haven't watched Fate and am not much interested in it. So, for me, it started very well before it just lost my interest. Still is great with good grammar. Just if you are not a Fate fan, it might not be for you. I would still give it a read, though, make your own decision if you like where it goes or not.
nooo, should have sif start up her own wolf cult. cult of being good girls/boys and how belly rubs are demanded. and how all bad masters should be struck down.
does the system screen he has mean he can learn more tech? you got all that high-level tech he should have been learning so he could use his fiction knowledge to try other ideas. like slipspace, hyperdrive, and so on. if you can try and make a different one. and try small things for the guardsman, better amour. think about all the guardsman having access to at least better equipment. would help a lot. as let's face it, even the spartan program from Halo would probably be way easier to create and fund. give the little guys some cheap upgrades
damn, really need to go through and place full stops. This whole paragraph is one sentence.
So she ran to New York and started up her carrier of choice, she is one of the top cloth designing genius but because of tony stark, she is in her current situation and can't go back after realizing of her pregnancy but also very stubborn and full of shame towards her parents because of her running and they will be disappointed by her after knowing this, even after they raised her like a son with all love they can give also wanted her to inherit their family business with high expectations, so she never thought of going back.
Marvel : Grey Matter as Illegitimate son of Tony Stark
Anime & Comics · Beginnerghost04
'If there is a day I won't hear this old man telling me to be careful, I'll know he got possessed and that's not Brom...' Giving Brom a side glance and nodded.
The Inheritance Cycle: Getting My Wish Fulfilled (Eragon)
Book&Literature · CouchPotatoDandy
Smoke? Do have dragons, so it might be a good idea to build up some smoke inhalation resistance from all the fire that will happen. maybe wind too? get to a high location, a mountain maybe if can get somewhere it is windy. see if you can get resistance to wind pressure, again good for flying and with breathing so high up with how oxygen levels will be down. be a good way to build up those resistance while training up there. wearing weights could be good, too. Some on the ankles can take off easily before going into water. have the water resistance against you while training under there, also trains up holding breath and resistance on the eyes with eyes being open in the water. might also want to get a tool he can use, a sword, or just a farm tool he could tie rocks on the end of. then can train the muscles in the wrists, which are very important for handling a sword.
Still, his mind wandered. What other resistances could he develop in the future? There had to be more ways to toughen his body, more skills he could unlock. The ideas started to blend together in his tired mind as sleep slowly overtook him.
The Inheritance Cycle: Getting My Wish Fulfilled (Eragon)
Book&Literature · CouchPotatoDandy
hopefully, this new form is rarely used, which is the main reason why I dislike human form in other stories as the human form ends up becoming the main form they are always in. Am here to read about a dragon, not a human. Takes away from the reason why people got interested and started reading, it also takes away the title of the story.
MCU: Super Kryptonian Dragon
Anime & Comics · Ravinder_Singh_807