Amy_Roy_3075

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2021-03-21 Se unió Global
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Amy_Roy_3075
Amy_Roy_3075
1 months ago
Commented

Derek's mom being against it rings more true than this. She should trust her daughter more since they are supposed to be close.

Amy_Roy_3075
Amy_Roy_3075
1 months ago
Commented

dang! 3 years of kindergarten?

Three years of kindergarten life passed by in a flash.

Sweetlove: Spoiled by My Childhood Sweetheart

Sweetlove: Spoiled by My Childhood Sweetheart

Teen · Pear Cute Fish

Amy_Roy_3075
Amy_Roy_3075
1 months ago
Commented

cliffhanger!!!!! arg!!! I typically don't read this genre but you got me.

Amy_Roy_3075
Amy_Roy_3075
1 months ago
Commented

It's keel over.

But that plan died a horrible death. A death so awful that Emily, the very person who had come up with it, did not even mourn for it. The moment that Derek walked into the office. Looking as though he was about to kill over at any moment. Emily had felt herself begin to waver. 

Sleeping With The CEO

Sleeping With The CEO

Urban · cai_hong

Amy_Roy_3075
Amy_Roy_3075
2 months ago
Commented

I just read 2 chapters of just purely made up of inner turmoil. This story needs to move. It's getting expensive with not much forward momentum.

Amy_Roy_3075
Amy_Roy_3075
2 months ago
Commented

I've read slow burns but this is the slowest. We constantly hear the bad thoughts emotions and misunderstandings. When i pay to open the next chapter to just get more of the same, I ask if I want to keep going or just read a new book. I just want you to know what it's like to read only struggle and bad thoughts. When i see how many chapters are left and how far I've gotten with only so much progress it seems daunting.

Amy_Roy_3075
Amy_Roy_3075
2 months ago
Commented

It's lava. Larva are like maggots and such.

" Come here" He demanded and I walked towards him. We stood toe to toe and then he asked " Why do you smell so much like the mountain larva? "

BLOODROSE: THE VAMPIRE LORDS' MATE

BLOODROSE: THE VAMPIRE LORDS' MATE

LGBT+ · Anna_Baibe

Amy_Roy_3075
Amy_Roy_3075
3 months ago
Commented

I like the wording here. Very well written. "The night stretches on like a fragile thread..."

There's something bittersweet about it all, a slow-burning ache beneath the comfort of his warmth. The night stretches on like a fragile thread, and I cling to it, refusing to let go.

Fallen General's Omega (BL)

Fallen General's Omega (BL)

LGBT+ · Sofie_Vert01

Amy_Roy_3075
Amy_Roy_3075
3 months ago
Commented

This is not important but if "as" is there it should be usual instead of usually. I usually ignore typos. As usual, I continue to ignore typos .

This left the five of us to enjoy dinner. Mateo, Zoe, Luca, Ash, and I. Zeiroi and Treva ate in the kitchen with Maria and staff, as usually, and Sergio didn't come. Tessa sent food to Sergio's villa before she went with Vito to the town to celebrate with everyone else.

The Supreme Alpha

The Supreme Alpha

Fantasy · RedSonia

Amy_Roy_3075
Amy_Roy_3075
3 months ago
Posted

So far the story is well written. It has a nice pace and likable characters.

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